This is so amazing! Keep up the good work!

I love the badass vibe you give Erza and Juvia. You and your writing are fabulous keep at it

AW man i was enjoying this story :( pity it was never picked up

OH MAH GOD THIS IS AMAZING. ITS SO CUTEEE AND FUNNY AT THE SAME TIME. I LOVE U AND UR STORY SO MUCH PLEASE FINISH THIS.

ahhh I checked back on this for fun and I'm so glad to see the update! I love how u write them, especially jellal... like wow. he has an actual personality

Awww, I'm glad you updated!
After I took a break from the whole fandom and stuff (I mean the ending of the series was pretty disappointing to me), I re-fell in love with it all over again when I came across the first couple of episodes.

And it's no secret that I'm a fan of your writing style and actually seeing your development is also super fun! Seriously, you still have your unique way of expressing yourself, your comparisons and references are just so... you. I love that. And the story is still super smooth and coherent. It's always a joy reading your work, although you might have matured what actually reflects in your writing.
Your narrative is still loud (which I like) but it has also gotten a little bit calmer. But maybe it's because it's in Erza perspective and Erza isn't as crazy as Juvia... She has still a couple of screws loose but not as much as my water queen :D

Anyways, I really loved how you brought a couple of important remarks towards feminism up. It's so true that girls are taught to take shit from boys while boys get away because they are simply boys and they are allowed to be violent and mean to girls... I really like the way you are thinking.

And I find Erza's scheming totally hilarious! You really can feel how she is torn apart and that inner back and forth is quiet entertaining.

Well, I also find it cute how much Jellal actually noticed about her and how well he knows her. So, yeah, he was totally observing her and he so has a thing for her... tough he has a weird way of showing it!
And thank you for bringing up that goddamn tattoo! I seriously want to know why he has it and what it means...
I noticed that in the 100 years quest spin-off a dude that also had a facial tattoo similar to Jellal's. Maybe he's also originally from that corner of the world... but it really is driving me mad because I still want to know why he has it!

Anyways, I'm looking forward to reading more from you in the future and I hope you are doing well (or at least better than me! hahaha). And I wouldn't say know to a little bit of Juvia and Erza bonding time (*wink**wink*) !

Until next time and lots of love to you :D

THIs has been one of my favorite FT fics on ! I've been an avid reader here for almost 6 years (since middle school) and only recently began my own account here and have slowly been adding favorite stories to my page. In short- Just wanted to say that the hiatus is much appreciated and well accepted. Keep up the good work, i really do look forward as being apart of the community in writing and cant wait to see whats next!

Not bad! This seems interesting :)

Oh my goooodddd! You updated the story! I'm so happy I have been waiting for this update, this story is just so amazing, the sarcasm and everything! I love itttttttt

ooh hoo, hoo! This is getting EXTREMELY good! everyone, especially Juvia, is OOC...BUT I LOVE IT! this. is. a. great. fic! and it's hard to find those these days (probably because I've ready all of them) I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE! please keep writing! ***~

Finally something fucken decent to read! Ugh sick of the fluffy pretentious shitty stories I've been reading of late. This is what I needed a whole lot a sarcasm and pottyville lingo with comebacks to kick you in the pie hole.

You don't know how much I needed this. Lol. But seriously, thanks for updating. This chapter just made my day (Jellal was annoying tho).

Oh my god it updated again! Highlight of my week right here! I love you so much right now

Best Friday EVER. I love this fic and getting an update alert have given me a reason to go on living in this cruel world. I loved every second of this date and Erza’s outrageous reactions to everything. As always I love this voice. You’ve put such a personal touch on the narrative and I absolutely ADORE it. Please excuse me now because I’m just so excited I’m rambling.

this is hilariously funny. I didn't think I could laugh so hard at how a mean girl's head would work but this is it! the schemes and adult jokes and profanity. dear lord