Great first chapter.

Don't sell yourself so short, i am sure you are a great writer. You just need more confidence in your own abilities.

I can't wait to see what Harry and Neville will do next. How will Harry make Neville produce magic?

Also when will Harry find out that he has a vault filled with gold at Gringotts?

Please don't abandon this story, i think it is a great plot idea.

Aye I love this book mate it’s great

You can do it I acatually really injoyed the first chapter good luck

Yeah, sometimes the muse is fickle and it takes time to sort things out. Take the time you need to get things as good as you can. You have an interesting premise with considerable potential and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Harry/Luna and Neville/"Hufflepuff to be named later' sound like good pairings to me. As long as it is not with Ron, I don't mind seeing Hermione paired with a good wizard, or witch.

The premise seems really promising, and I'm glad your giving it another go to continue!

I do hope you do finish this. I like it so far.

I really liked the first chapter and I hope that you keep going!

YES!

Waa! There is nothing I love and hate more than a fabulous story with only one chapter. Its like having a fabulous taste of rich dark homemade chocolate cake and only allowed one bite! I really hope that you continue this have talent and I look forward to reading the rest!

I was excited after the first chapter. Best of luck in your writing.

Thank you for the update. One of the reasons I've been following this tale was the Harry/Hermione in the characters listing.

Returning your gift of honesty, I'm not really a fan of Hermione/Krum, and will likely journey elsewhere for fanfiction tales.

So, thank you for sharing your story, and good luck!

Thank you for your honesty and your forward ness I really hope to see this work grow and if it's anything like how I felt you were going with it in the beginning it's going to be the same fic that I had alerted and followed

lastima a mi me encanto.

Okay I'm excited to read what you are going to write and hope you're improved. Im first chapter both characters actions are too sudden no mistrust whatsoever. Think about it will you.
Good luck.

I like the concept and hope you follow it through.