Love your story now following! . Please update soon!

I'm glad to see you updated! This was a great as always :3 I was expecting him to moan into her ear, but damn. That's a start. Sexy, seductive Envy gets me every time 3 More please! Looking forward to future chapters!

Glad to see back at writing for a bit and it's a pretty good.l chapter.

poor Huges i really like his chacter for being such a father to everyone he is a great guy and i hope hes gets some resuramce about Hitomi. Yay Scar was mentioned i know i should hate him for killing Winry's parents but still dude is a boss just such a badass. Envy and Hitomi are still going through the first stages of Beuty and the best. Still it was nice that Envy is starting to be less of a dick and more caring to Hitomi he just needs to learn more and open up better

I thought you will never update this story. And finally Hughes is noticing Hitomi not around.

Love it!

Poor Hitomi.

red face so we had the classic guy looks at female in the bathroom ohhh boy oh boy that was nosebleeding and very classical. Envy seems to show sighns of well a standard jerk i mean he treats Hitomi badly even tried to strangle her but hides his own problem emtions such as the one he has for Farther. It was cool seeing Pride in this chapter always was intrested how to acted with the other Homuclus's. So Envy and Hitomi in the same room there is going to be a lot of mess sin't there

Hey when Hitomi meets Pride. Will Pride remind Hitomi of Aito? Oh and can they meet in the city? They could meet like how Mrs. Bradley try to save Pride from getting hit by a car? And Pride could see Hitomi as a big sister he ever had.

Do you want to try the two of them sleeping together in the same bed in the next chapter? I mean how are they going to sleep like this?

When will Hitomi know that Envy is a Homunculus nota human? She still thinks he a human like her.

I really hope Hitomi will see the Hughes family. And you still have told us about her little brother.

In the bar chapter title thing, you put down 'Prideful'. But in the wall chapter title you put 'Road To Recovery'. Which one is the real chapter title? Can you fix it?

I can't believe he almost saw her naked. Please make more.

Please update more! I'm dying to know how they fall in love. And I really hope she see Maes Hughes again.