God is a greedy bastard?, devils law? No offense but I'm beginning to see you as a satanist

Dammit I hate this that have good thing going and then they abandon it

damnit. i hoped to read more chapter.

Such terrible grammar. It seems you need a lot more work before you can get anymore readers.

Why is it that every story like this narutos susposed to be this superpower but gets kicked around by a girl that's susposed to like him... Idk about you but if some girl grabed me by the junk like that I would press charges.

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Great story a shame that you gave up on it.

Well, first chapter was ok, I think, but from this one your story became just usual goofy crap. Naruto is already whipped so much I wonder how he can talk to any girl without dropping on four bowing and licking their feet. Add this to your horrible grammar, pathetic humor attempts, using Japanese words and hitting every irritating anime troops

Sigue con la publicación de esta historia

You can't write for shit. Your grammar can't even get one of your books Jan child's section of a library.. I'm gone..

It's not a coop school you fucking idiot it's co ed

Well, good story, and way past due for a new chapter, along with Naruto revealing why you shouldn't tick him off. And curious, well Kalawarner and Mittelt be joining Raynare in the future? And while Tsubaki is going to be with Kiba, well there be any other members of Sona's peerage that well be in the harem, like Bennia? Anyway, well there be any other girls from Naruto's world on here, like say, Fu, or Kaguya? And how many girls from other series well be on here?

continues the story

Don't use fan fic to spread your disgusting anti religion bullshit. If you don't like it shut the fuck up and kill yourself