Reviews for The Wolf
Lechuga Loca chapter 11 . 1/27
Entré a leer esta historia por los personajes citados: Hans y Heinkel son dos personajes que llaman mucho mi atención, y la -posible- dinámica entre ambos es otra cosa que capta mi interés.
En fin, estoy encantada. Heinkel es uno de mis tres personajes favoritos de este manga, pero lamentablemente hay muy pocas cosas escritas de ella. Tu historia tiene intriga y misterio, y has sabido plasmar bastante bien el sentimiento de venganza de la chica, unido a sus prejuicios acerca de los ingleses y en especial de sus nuevos "compañeros".
Pretendía comentar cuando llegara al último capítulo, pero no me he aguantado jaja. Realmente me gusta esto, no sé cómo no lo había leído antes :)
Chrosis chapter 22 . 1/21
I'm glad to see you're updsting again! It's good to see Heinkle get some love from the community.
James Birdsong chapter 32 . 1/22/2019
Surely a good story
Bom chapter 29 . 12/31/2018
Loving it, your weiting is awesome!
Though I do hope we’ll hear from Seras soon, I kinda miss her, especially her’s and Heinkel’s dynamic:)
Nadinakalee chapter 24 . 11/18/2018
I'm so grateful for your updates to this story.
Bom chapter 21 . 10/28/2018
I'm so glad you are updating this, it's a great piece, not to mention a very rare one dealing with the aftermath of Millenium wreckage!
Nadinakalee chapter 18 . 10/4/2018
I am so glad you updated this amazing story.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/5/2017
I love this...and I'm going to love this till the end..
Nakumare chapter 10 . 1/22/2017
I will say that the character interaction within this story is very well done thus far, and the concept of the remaining Battalion resorting to necromancy to bring the Major back, while very simple, is also quite effective as a main plot-point.

I do still hope that at some point there is some expansion on just how different the progression of the events were that would allow so many of the Millennium leaders can be alive despite how everything points to these events transpiring right after the London Blitz was quelled by the death of the Major and Walter's betrayal.
The fact that this being the case yet so many people being alive, least of all Zorin and Winkle and Schrodinger respectively, is still a bit jarring without viable context with the story being as late into the actual canon as it is.

On top of that, it will be interesting to see any potential development you have considered for Hans, even if the idea of him being a child when Hitler was rising to power drastically contradicts how Alucard at one point clarified that Hans is very likely over 100 years old, and I do believe he's actually canonically recorded as being one of the last remaining werewolves at an age of 155 or something of that number.
Nakumare chapter 9 . 1/9/2017
It's an interesting story so far, and only with some minor errors in the writing in the first two chapters for the most part.

If there's one peeve of mine, it's that this alternate take on just how many survived is a bit inconsistent in how it seems to have this be taking place after the attack on London, with Alucard gone and Seras finally having taken at least one human soul by drinking blood from a source, yet certain things contradict this without explanation.
Rip van Winkle being alive despite dying at sea, is a big one, as well as Seras being described as still having the pre-transformation design and not missing an arm and Zorin being no worse for wear, yet Pip is portrayed as having died, and the other Geese let themselves be eaten by Seras too to fight beside him and her.
Not to mention, Alucard seems to be gone, yet Schrodinger is totally fine.

I dont so much have a problem with these if there's some sort of explanation given for such changes and shifts, but thus far there's been no such things to explain this alternate take.
89ingenting chapter 7 . 12/31/2016
I like it. Not too many expand on Heinkel's character and you do a splendid job of it. The interactions seem realistic and in character and you have painted up a very interesting AU so far. Happy new year!
AmericanWildDog chapter 4 . 12/17/2016
great story!
splinterclaw chapter 3 . 3/1/2016
Seems interesting, I would not mind seeing more.
electro moonlight chapter 3 . 9/26/2015
A really interesting fiction so far. I love the way you have paced it and I cant wait to see what happens next.
St.Anger chapter 3 . 9/8/2015
Me likey
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