This is pretty good please continue

This story is absolutely fantastic for being your first fanfic! I love it, so it makes me sad that his hasn't been updated since 2015... If you ever post another chapter though, I'll be here to read it! This is such a great story, I can't get over it!

Oh wow... MY HEART! I started reading this yesterday and I just couldn't stop. You brought me close to tears SO MANY times.
Poor Stanley, he just can't catch a break! If you ever continue this story, I hope there's reconciliation and lots of hugs in Stan's future! Heaven knows he deserves them after all this...

Anyway, thanks for writing!

This is so incredibly good!

Oh my gosh.
This is so gooooood! Ah! Screw you Grammarly! I'll spell good however I wanna!

Aw man, this is never gonna be updated again, is it? It was SO good! Thanks for the amazing read, anyway. Peace!

Oh dear.. This is such a fascinating story. I adore it to bits. You are really talented at writing. And you sure know how to engage a reader - I have barely slept for two days, because I had to finish reading your two fanfics. I've just finished reading the last chapter of this one and will wait with great patience for the next chapter, if there will ever be one. I hope you will be willing to keep up your good work and continue this fantastic fanfic, because you are the first and only author I've found so far that actually writes good Gravity Falls fanfiction.

You have a writing-style unlike any book or fic I've ever read and I think it's captivating and intriguing.
I can't help but hope for more!

Best regards from your new fan from Denmark,
Michala

Love this! Any chance you'll get back to it?

Holy cow, 92k words written! Long, well-written stories are quite rare, compared to the sheer amount of them on this site. You've left so many unanswered questions, don't pull a Hirsch on us! My fingers are crossed for an update someday!

It's a tragedy that this fic hasn't been updated in a year because it is fantastic.

Just...wow. This story is fantastic. I really wish to see what happens next! You're an amazing and creative writer! Thank you so much for what you've done so far!

Oh my this was a good read! Very descriptive! I could see everything before my eyes!

Don't suppose you will ever update this beast?

Anyway, awesome work thus far! Thank you so much for posting it!

And that, my dear, is how you write a fanfiction.

It's unfinished at the time, I know; I was more disappointed than I'd expected to be when I saw it hadn't been updated for about six months. But, even so, this is most definitely within my top five favorite Gravity Falls fanfictions, quite possibly top three. Thank you. Still reeling from the cliffhanger.

I . . . don't have words to express how much I enjoyed this story. Foil Candle, you're one of the few authors that can pull off a rich, highly-detailed language without sounding pretentious or like you're needlessly putting in words to impress an audience. And that's refreshing. Honestly, the first few paragraphs stunned me for a moment as I tried to absorb everything you were telling me. Guess that's what happens when you read too many non-Foil-Candle fanfictions in a row, eh? Really, though, marvelous job.

It's a quick comment, I know, but if I tried to go longer, I'd start stumbling over my words even more than I'm doing now. Hope you don't mind. Just, ah, I really liked this fanfiction. A lot. Maybe you can find the perseverance to finish it, yeah?

You are one of the best authors I have ever seen on here! I really wish that this story would be updated, but I understand. Life happens. But honestly, you should still keep writing, even if it's not on here. You are good. Keep it up! :D

I love this story so much. The amount of work and thought put into it is astounding.