Ahhhhhhh this one is a good one _

Loving your plot line, Can’t wait to see more!

That invasion onto Mist was great. And I liked how you describe the land itself trying to hide the shame that befell that village.
Oh, and the Hogwarts security level was hilarious. Like, blithely the giant golem hit home run on the massive projectile out of orbit and that was it, brushed aside and go back to normal. XD

It was so confusing their meeting with team 7. What I get is that instead of Zabuza Gato hired Raiga, who hasn't met Ranmaru? And how did they get the guy on their side?
Kakashi really had an 'ohshit' moment there, more than triple S ranked indeed XD

I admit it, you made me like your Itachi. I still don't like canon Itachi but I really like your version of him. And of Orochimaru. Heck, the whole concept of the missing nin village was so bizarre. I never thought I'd come to care for the characters.
But yeah, I love them.
Ah and the epic showdown between Kakashi and Gai... really. It seems taking the skeletons of the closet out for a straight week did the copy-nin a modicum of good. Maybe.

The one vs all of the morning sparring session was awesome haha! They pushed Harry into fighting 'dirty' by using spells.
And I wonder what Orochimaru really thinks of Hari, he wants his opinions, looks at him for validation and attention but at the same time is envious of his position and power. Mmm.

Dementors love the amaterasu flames? Great.
But the rest of the villages haven't collected their missing ninja... hehe.
Orochimaru is once more envious of Harry's power, wonder what this will devolve into, he's like a petty child.

Harry's sense of humor sure is something haha! So Hiruzen finally is angry enough that he would even take Danzo back after everything. Wonder under which rock he was hiding...

Kakashi is indeed strong as far as emotional strength goes for ninja. I loved the dementor's scene and the recreation of Azkaban, seriously, if there is one absolute nemesis for shinobi it is the dementor. The antithesis of them would be the miko and monks of Inuyasha that could actually fight and even maybe destroy them I guess. They fight with their very souls.

Man, sad songs that resonate with cold hearted killers? You go, kinslayer! XD
It's nice that Roshi found his way to the missing nin village, wonder if Utakata is dead. And Kurama! I hope he reunites with Harry.

So Itachi still became a kinslayer. I don't like him, never had. I know he is popular and all but there is just something so dumb and depressing about his character. His genius mind brainwashed by the people who bred and raised him as a weapon, he was trained as a soldier, never a leader. And that is why he followed someone's orders when he was a stressed out beyond belief thirteen year old. Then he tries to salvage his sanity by steamrolling saying to himself that there was no other way and it had to be done. He can't accept any other option to the plan he followed at that point because it would mean everything he did was wrong and his entire sacrifice was for nothing but facilitate his enemy's success. Honestly, the only real choice he took that deviated from the plan was having Sasuke kill him, to put him out of his misery and validate his own actions at the same time.
He's as fucked up as they come and for that I don't like him.

LOL! The missing nin band. I wonder who will be the vocalist. Anyone who can make their very voice deathly I think.
The fight with those crazy guys was amazing, glad Harry has mastered shinobi arts to this extent. And yeah, the Danzo grudge was completely expected haha
I'm glad Orochimaru has come to respect Harry, the very fact he listens to his opinions and advice is mark enough. Wow.

Haha electric guitar with jutsus, to think Zabuza would be reinventing metal music XD
The dinner inside the missing nin village was a riot, I can only imagine how hard those would be infiltrators would have sweated, no doubt they felt it was their last meal.

Haha Ice tentacles for Haku XD
And it's nice how so many of the residents defend their newfound home

The bird imitating his laughter was golden, loved it. And yeah, Orochimaru would be too intrigued to leave the mystery be haha