Awww! You warned us but it’s still...ugh! Great writing though, thanks

This was... fantastic and heartbreaking all at the same time. His hesitation, the desire to want more, jumped off the page.
This will make a great full fic and I can't wait.
Love you!

Oh this O/S could be a great story I hope u keep write it ... I would love to read more ...

:(*)

Yeah, life isn't always hea.
Thanks for two very realistic characters. Saludos

I wasn't going to read when I saw that this wasn't an HEA. So I gave it a try and got drawn in paragraph by paragraph. Really enjoyable. You've got a longer story here if you want...you've got a lot to work with. Thanks.

Awww... this stings a bit, but it was good. Thanks for sharing it.

That's such a sad ending. Poor guy...
Would love to see if he ever goes back to her.

Oh wow poor Edward will they ever meet again

Nooooo! I know you labeled it as a one shot but... please if you ever get even the slightest bit of hankering to continue the story, please do! The heartbreak Edward felt when leaving Bella resonated with me. Then again, I guess that's why it makes a great one shot because of the "could've been, should've been" as opposed to yeah, it happened, now deal. lol!

First off loved this. Beautiful words and characters. I can already see a way to a HEA...

Seriously, I hope you write like maybe 2 more chapters to like finsish this story off, cause this story some of the best stuff I have read in a LONG TiME!

Any chance you'll continue this? I love it.

Would loved to read more!

Oh wow. That was amazing. But it made me so sad for Edward. Dammit. I want you to take back the "The End" and write some more. ;). Really, very well written, I just finish it in my head and Edward goes back to Bella and they live happily ever after!