this was such a cute, well written, and perfectly thought out story. I know it was written a while ago, I wanted to say thank you for writing it, and sharing it. You are a wonderful writer

Omg this story was soo good! I read it in 2 days even tho I was trying to savor it lol. I hope you don’t give up writing, you have a gift

I have read all of divergent fics, M and not M, and I really hope you write more in the future because you are so talented. I only read FF for a few things, so it's not often that I find an author that I can't get enough of. Thank you for sharing this story.

Except for the fact that I never want this story to end, this chapter was a wonderful way to do it. I think it's clever to reveal the crisis resolution thru Amar's voicemails. I have to say I am surprised Tris hasn't been on BC since the pregnancy scare with Peter... It occurred to me that she may have stopped it if she hadn't been dating anyone for a while, but it seems like she would start once she got with Tobias and just double up with the condoms. Regardless, I love that Tris is the first woman Tobias has ever not worn protection with and how you portray his impression of it. I want to know her POV though! I am reading this after you already added an epilogue but I still wanted to review this chapter :)

This. Chapter. Is. Amazing. You are a phenomenal writer.

Awwww omg this was the cutest thing ever! It is so good and heart touching!

I adored this fic. You did such a great job with this and I hope you continue to write. Thanks for sharing your story!

Tension!

Thank you, thank you for the opportunity to indulge in my fantasies on FourTris. Your writing and prose is very readable. You have brought unique twists to the characters. Please continue to write (and more FourTris please). You have amazing talent! Glad you had BK2U for beta reading too.

Whew! I certainly thought that Marcus will eventually make it into the picture but this is a good twist. I love that Tobias had the ring so far in advance... but what do you expect from someone who has been dreaming about it for so long. Glad Eric was only superficially involved in the plot. It would have been really hard if he tried anything physical on Tris and Tobias had to defend her (although she can certainly do it on her own) and get in trouble.

So poignant of a meeting. Nice to see healing between T and Mom. But would it happen so fast?

Holy mack! I need a cold shower. ;)

Wow! This is a really intense chapter. The depth of Tobias' love...

What is it about thanksgiving that brings out emotions in everyone? This chapter is hard but it had to be said. Tris' family needs to understand and I think there is no other way for it to come out. If nothing else, the doubt of their potential grandchildren possibly being exposed to such treatment should be a catalyst - to break off relations with Marcus.

I like this chapter. So important to be written. Not only does therapy help for victims but how there are other alternates to empower a victim. Also the idea of coming forward to prevent if from happening to others. Yes, it can be painful and embarassing and humiliating but also selfless.