Heh, still as wonderfully sweet as the first time i've read. SO glad I came across this story again in another random whim of mine.

Hey great story i like it :D and the ending is satisfying, keep up !

That was quite pleasant; I rather enjoyed it.

Perfect story and a wonderful read

Hey thanks for this story :) I don't know anything about final fantasy but you made it very intresting and easy to read. Without getting someone who knows nothing super confused. I love all the relationships in this story and how they played out, they were very well written-believable. And I am so happy that the two got together in the end. Keep up the good work~Cheers

No matter how many times I read this.. It never fails to make me fall Inlove with this fic

Thanks for sharing this, i absolutely loved it - the story wasn't overcomplicated and Lightning and gang pretty much stayed in character. I thought Fang could be a little cockier but the entire story worked out fine. It was nice to read another story about an old ship again :)

Needs more nekkid D:

I got butterflies in my stomach just from reading this chap. Soo glad they're finally taking the first step together :)

Nice story. I'd love to see a Cocoon Dating Etiquette were Lightning was forced to take an Etiquette Class a while ago, and then tried wooing Fang. Either Fang and Vanille would know exactly what she was doing and everyone else would have no idea, or everyone else would think she was a little too formal and old-fashioned but treat her normally while Fang and Vanille wondered what the hell was going on.

Thanks for writing such an engaging story. It was definitely a unique idea, and I think you executed it very well. The pacing of the story is fantastic, and the characters are completely believable. I love the build up through the entire story, and I think it ended exactly where it should have. On top of that the setting on Pulse was the same as the game setting's, which brought the FFXIII universe even more alive to me. Thanks for tying everything together so nicely and keeping me happy reading for the whole night!

I really felt like you found a niche here. Instead of going for a gimmick or an unrealistic idea, you simply went with...courtship. Incredibly refreshing, and you made the entire story very believable. Lightning is quite a tricky character to write, and you entered some difficult territory which you dealt with admirably. I honestly had a smile plastered on my face through most of this story, and you even got a rare review out of me! Be proud of your work and I shall be keeping my eye on future work you may or may not do.

This was a fantastic story! Wonderfully written! I love how long it took for everything to completely come to fruition, it made it just that much sweeter when it finally did :) Very adorable. I'll have to add it to my favourites so that I can reread it again in the future. Well done!

The feels are strong with this one.
Really from start to finish this whole story is epic. Be proud!

The ending lived up to expectation wayyyy and beyond ! thht was just adorably perfect i couldn't stop smiling , omg every bit of it , its rare to find a fanfic where it focuses on Fangs past and style in hunting and defo not one that would be like romance gifts to light that idea the entire ideas. That beautiful oil , fangs past omg just yeah , soo emotional sooo beautiful !

thats she wrote xx Its sad to see it finished , will their be a sequel , it would be soo amazing to see them living in the same house with all the gift and a pouch scene and their little sisters knowing it all worked out and Lib of course hehe, this entire story was amazing , the confession should only be the beginning , you can leave it up to our imaginations but with your writing style and ideas , ooo see you next time :)! thanks for this seriously