Great story. I love the way you brought the characters to life and kept their personalities intact from the movie.
-Slash

Apologies about the late review, I've been really busy the last week but what a chapter to finish on- great length, it filled in some blanks and I thought it was well laid out and written well.
I thought your writing suffered a dip in the middle where you weren't sure where you were going next but it was never 'bad'. I'd love to see you writing more Claire and Owen, perhaps a different set of circumstances or maybe you'll find inspiration again and do some one-shots as to the future scenes of Owen, Claire and the twins- either way I look forward to it.
Best of luck with everything, I wish you every future success possible

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! HAHA XD XP

It'd be interesting to see a sequel but I kinda want to see if you have any other ideas for them. Just nothing too sad like break ups X)

I thought the story was great. You had no serious issues with anything. It felt like a real-life story.

So sad that it's near the end, but so grateful for every word you've written, it's been a fantastic journey.
I really do hope you consider writing again, whatever genre or fandom inspires you next.
I can't wait for the epilogue and whatever it is you write next
Best Wishes all the way from North East England

loved it- it's great seeing everything come together.
I love Phillip- king of surprises!
Off to read the next chapter now!

That was awesome! I have so enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing! Peace and blessings!

OH MY GOD I KNW THAT SONG HOLY S*** IT TOTALLY FITZ THEM

Love the names! Nicholas is one of my favourite names (on my own hypothetical baby name list) and I've got a close friend called Mia, and it is a very pretty name. Looking forward to the epilogue!

Loved seeing so far into the future for Owen and Claire- their engagement and the news of twins.
I can't wait to see the next chapter
Keep up the fab writing
Best Wishes

Loved the chapter- worth the wait.
Sorry for the delay in review, I've been backed up with updates and i'm slowly making my way through them.
I hope your tests went well, fingers crossed for good results.
Off to read the next chapter now.
Best Wishes

and also i like the idea of zach liking awesome.

your awesome pls do more...

ok so why are private lawyers prosecuting the case instead of the D.A?