Oh my god. I need like twenty-seven more chapters and eight sequels and ALL OF IT CAN BE FLUFF. You're an amazing author and this... this makes my heart happy. Eee!

THIS WAS SO PERFECTLY WRITTEN- JESUS CHRIST- BLESS YOU, MY CHILD- JUST- BLESS- YOU ARE SO TALENTED AND OML- I LOVE YOU 33 AMAZING JOB!

I loved it ! Awesome fanfic!

Sequel please?

I like this version of how Lucy came to Fairy Tale, having her stay at her estate even after her fight with her father shows how she always thinks of a strategy :)

This is so cute and a huge inspiration for my own GrayLu fanfiction

It's beautiful and heartwarming. I like the way you put some canon details here :) Thanks for the story, I read this while heading home and I enjoyed it so much. Keep it up and can't wait to read another graylu from you! :D

Wow, your story is such a fun and romantic take on an AU plot! I love how Lucy is so in character while still keeping the 'high society' vibe from being at the estate. And I also just find it so touching how Lucy really keeps in touch and cares for her father here; additionally seeing the other side in why her father is acting like he does is great too! Overall I just adore how romantic and cute the whole story is! Thank you for writing and sharing your work!

PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS A ONE SHOT! PLease do more, please do more, PLEASE DO MOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEE!

Amazing! I still find it hard to accept that this is only a prompt. PLZ MAKE SOME SORT OF SEQUEL!

Please update

I loved Gray's description of Lucy. It was flirtatious without him even talking to her while he rested. So far so good. I am going back up to read MORE! Bwhahahaha. Oh how I miss Aquarius. Darn you for reminding me! :P Lol. Ah. So Loke and Grey are BFF's in this. Lol. I could somehow see that happening. Love at first sight? Really? Wow. Not a bad wow. Just a 'that is really sudden.' But then again, it happened in fairy tales all the time. So I guess I could see it. I love the contract Idea. Well played. Super kiss for the win! (PS. I opened a second window to switch between which is making this easier. Lol). Oh wow. I nearly lost it (laughing) at Jude's entrance as he caught Lucy and Gray. Love how strong you are allowing Lucy to be. Awe. That was a super sweet ending. Well done. :)

Oh my god. What did I just read? Oh, nothing special, just a fanfiction with my favourite FT pairing...
The story was really nothing special but somehow...you made it special, I don't know how you did it xD
They were sooo sweet together, I just kinda..freaked out
Yea, I can't really describe my joy right now, because my brain ceased to function and it still doesn't work xD
Great, fabulous, awesome fanfic, thank you very much 3

Beautiful. Just...I love you (and this)

First off, I love how you made Jude still seem loving towards his daughter! In the beginning, he doesn't seem super cold or hateful.
And I really love how Loke and Gray ar such good buddies here. It's hinted at in the canon verse, but no one really seems to touch on it...
Why is Gray so touchy about his age? It's a very legitimate question a father would ask a prospecting tutor.
Aw, what the heck? She just announces she'll take him to a fountain, and that's it? Saaadfaaace...
That necklace, those earrings... Oh, I see what you did there!
Aww... All in all, very cute and enjoyable. I don't really ship these two, but that was really well done.