Please update the Story please it has so much potential to be a amazing story

MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!

please continue

I love this make series please, need it in my life.

More!

Please continue this please?

dang,i really need to know how your going to continue is really damn interesting.

You got it okay good start

ok so this is a really good idea and i have hopes for this however i do have a few issues. first i know that the Spartans have abilities that the people of remnant would have never seen before, but you have Ozpin and Glynda (both of which are pretty much God tier lvl hunters) would be taken back so much. i mean i can see them being caught off guard be the invisibility thing and then while distracted may be the guy could have gotten around Glynda but she has her aura which would probably stop the blade from wounding her too badly. second this is a world were paladins and other mechs are produced by atlas so i don't think it would throw off all the students to the degree that you have written. my last issue is the main RWBY cast reactions to the take down of grim (especially Pyrrhas' dry heaving?) i mean this is what they are going to do for a living not only that but they do what the Spartans did often and they should be used to it by now. that said this story can be so awesome and i hope to what awaits us the readers and good luck in your writings

I love this story o far please keep working on it.

The writing style needs to be improved. Have constant remarks from the narrator is distracting and annoying.

why did you stop

This is good hope you continue this.

Please continue this is good.

please write more of this it really good