This is so good! Very well written! Please please continue this!

I NEED A FREAKIN UPDATE

This is one of my favourite one-shots in the hole fandom

Great job!

Wow. I really hate not only in the fanfics but in the movie. This is grate but it really need a secoond chapter. It feels incomplete. Please do another chapter please. Pretty please with a Bella of your choice on top?

Please do a second chapter to this! I'd love to see Beca tell her father, her bonding with her little brother, all of it!

I enjoyed this story!

This story is awesome but it feels imcomplete. Kind of like an idea that started strong but trailed off... y'know? And I totally respect you not shipping bechloe - though you could easily slip it in which i like - and absolutely love your spot on characterisation. you've got a very solid base for a story here and I hope that you consider continuing it.

I really liked this idea. It's an interesting way of portraying beca. I could see it though, her character is open for different things. Good job

I liked it, but I wish it had more.

feel very incomplete.

I loved this. And I loved that she was dyslexic. It's really nice to see someone writing Beca's character with issues and problems, but not being so self centered and shut off for once. Normally it's goes like Chloe tries to help and will get all the Bella's behind her but Beca is just a bitch because she's too stubborn. I think your characterization seemed a lot more believable if compared to the second movie.

I love please write more! Its so well writen. Update soon!

Interesting idea. Great read. Awesome depth. Thanks heaps for sharing

Awe i loved this