| Reviews for The heart that changed everything |
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   merseacow chapter 7 . 8/11/2019 I really, really enjoyed this story-I couldn't stop reading! I know it's marked as complete, but I hope there's some sort of sequel or follow-up-it can't end like this! Poor Lavellan! |
| ZenoLucario chapter 7 . 2/14/2016 Hey Congratulations 'Mom', glad to know you are doing well, and you have a new bundle of joy, been to long since we've chatted, hope everything for you is going well. You certainly haven't lost your touch with writing amazing heart warming chapters of epicness, I still read Cost of Life often it is the first story of yours I read and I still enjoy it, this one is fantastic itself. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/28/2015 I loved every chapter of this |
| Dragongirllover chapter 6 . 11/24/2015 Wow. I got to say my heart has been racing since i first started this story. I love it. I really hope you will be writing more soon. |
| lindsattack chapter 6 . 10/14/2015 My first thought after reading this chapter was "FINALLY!" Can't wait to see how this complicates things, in a good way! |
| City-of-Dimes chapter 6 . 10/13/2015 Yeah! Another chappie! Well done. I almost laughed when solas shattered the glass. Jealous much? Update soon! |
| trixter77 chapter 6 . 10/12/2015 What a great present in my inbox today! . good luck with your little one! |
| trixter77 chapter 5 . 10/11/2015 Trespasser left a void in me that you've helped to fill a little. Thank you! |
| City-of-Dimes chapter 5 . 10/10/2015 Please update soon! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/10/2015 I like the cute romantic part. |
| Erulastiel Nostariel chapter 1 . 10/4/2015 I'm actually reviewing this prior to reading this first chapter, just for the fact of how distracted I was by the first half of the chapter being one whole chunk of a paragraph. Please separate your paragraphs? |
| Pnlass chapter 5 . 10/2/2015 love this story and cant wait to see the rest! hopefullylove this story and cant wait to see the rest! |
| Ale-ann chapter 5 . 9/26/2015 Just passing by to say that I LOVE the good job you're doing with this fanfiction! It's absolutely everything I needed to read after finishing Trespasser twice! I don't usually read anything that tries to continue the original story! People who do that end up making completely out of the original universe of the story! But not you! The characters, the story, everything sounds very much like the game! I think the only problems are some words you repeat too much! Bus nothing that compromises the quality of the story! I can't wait for the next chapters! |
| Bellafrey chapter 1 . 9/25/2015 It is a good story, but I would go back and check the spelling when you have time, it's not so much the incorrect spelling as it is the incorrect use of the words, otherwise I think you've done a fantastic job. Kudos. |
| kamehamesaiyanmommy chapter 5 . 9/20/2015 Love it so much! Hope you right another to follow! Helping heal my breaking heart after having just finished the dlc! |
