I'm so glad I found this story again. I so love how you have wrote it all. Thank you for your talents

Thank you for this beautiful story! :D

A friend told me about this story. I love it. Sure wish you would finish it. It would be nice to know how Maura reacts after getting her memory back. Did Jane have a boy or girl? The wedding? Was Constance notified?

Perhaps not the most sensible chapter to read whilst at work. I think the technical term for both Maura and Jane is "busted!"

Beautiful story with great dialogue, not just between Jane Maura either. Loved tender caring Jane too - we don't often see her like that. But I found it hard reading because of the lack of, or incorrect punctuation; the frequent misspelled words or bad English. Please get your work proof read before publishing and the flow would have been perfect. Your writing is exceptional but the overall presentation let you down. I would be more than happy to help you out on that! Despite what I've said, I couldn't put the story down once I started it and you are super talented...

This was beautiful, if you want to do another chapter I wouldn't be mad.
Thanks for writing and sharing.

OMG this is so sweet, really beautiful.

loved it. thanks.

I absolutely loved this story. I should have been commenting on each chapter because now things are leaving my mind, sorry. I love how protective of Maura Jane is, and I love that this was a love story but you also showed the police work to catch the people who did this to Maura. Jane so easily slipped into the role of girlfriend and helped Maura so much, it was obvious that she loved Maura so much and 'playing' the girlfriend just made her realize how much. I'm glad that Jane finally told Maura the truth about her memories, and I'm glad that it didn't freak her out too much. Amazing story.

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[ "How much I love you, how much I love the baby... how much my life has made sense since you... how it only makes sense with you.]

Omg Maura tho lol.

["You do realize you've managed to do the thing neither of your brothers have?" Frankie pointed out to her with a smirk. "You've gotten Dr. Maura Isles to date you." He smiled at her. "Did she kiss you?" ]

Lol. Love this dialogue with Frankie N Jane.

["Damn, I'd owe Frost fifty bucks." He made a vague fist with his hand and waggled it playfully up towards the sky. "You angelic bastard." ]

The thought of Frost not in a Rizzles fanfic just hurts.

["It's okay, she likes to tease us ever since she caught us on the couch that night." She gave a soft shy smile. "I really did miss you." Her voice dropped to an even more intimate tone. "And it doesn't hurt as much as you think, my lip." She pointed out assuming it was the reason Jane hadn't kissed her yet.]

Omg.

["Though I understand if it is unattractive." She gave her girlfriend another 'reason' for not kissing her again yet.]

There she goes again lol. This is actually adorbs to read.

[ "I assure you Detective I was not looking at anyones ass while I ran, yours is the only one I enjoy watching flex and bounce." Maura smiled at her lovingly. "I wasn't going to say ass." Jane smirked but she was blushing hard. "My ass doesn't bounce, I don't have an ass." She objected. "No it doesn't bounce in that sense, but your running style, the power you put into your strides, it makes it seem as if your backside is bouncing from one landing to the next as you run." Maura admitted the detail as she meant it from her observations. "I noticed you didn't deny it flexed though." "I took ass flexing at the academy, for extra credits." Jane smirked. "Many hours, just me and a quarter." "You are incorrigible." Maura tried not to laugh to much as it hurt her ribs but she wasn't going to admit it to Jane. "Though I now can't wait to test how much you've retained from that class when we get home. I have a very special quarter you can show off with."]

Maura lol tho. And Jane just goes with the flow.

Very very intrigued.

A great read. Very well written story. I look forward to reading more of your stories. A sequel?

So love this story!
Please add more to it. Like them getting married and the baby.
PLEASE!
The way you write this story is so Beautiful!

Please continue

Thanks for the story. It was really enjoyable. Cheers, Ken