The three children are so cuuuuuuuuute!

nice story! i really enjoyed it but i would recommend doing a round of proof reading!

sloppy writing

Loved your story, thank-you for sharing.

Just wanted to point out where Krum said none of his fellows remember Gregorovich but have heard of his tryanny, Gregorovitch is a wand maker and made Krums wand. Im pretty sure you meant Grindelwald.

Awesome

LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

The correct term is Naga. A Naga is half human (hips up) and half snake/serpent (hips down).

Thank you, awesome story.

this was one of the greatest story ever

I loved it i loved it i LOVED IT! awesomely written ! I have no words... Just loved it!

Dumb-old-dwarf died after seven years? I thought he wouldn't last three!

This story seems interesting, but I just cannot stand Ginny, and especially Ginny/Harry. Garry is the single worst pairing JKR could have made, the only thing that comes close is Her-ron. Goodbye fic.

Hey I'm glad that you got round to finishing this story as its still one of my favourites with your collections of OCs being amazing.

The chapter dedicated to Lusca giving he battle orders was suitably stirring / chilling and very intense to read. I liked the pulling together of all the things that you had covered earlier in the story. Though I would have liked to have maybe a little more description with the actual battle, such as a description of Makar coming into play, I enjoyed it overall.

I hope you go on to write more, possibly with similar concepts? But I enjoy your writing and will be looking into more of your work

SharpRaptor