Reviews for Waiting For You |
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Mary chapter 1 . 5/10/2017 I'm tired of these gay fanfics |
Little-Katsu chapter 1 . 8/11/2016 It was a good little OS. I've already read a story about Chris coming back alone for Josh and then being eaten by him because he can't kill him even if he is a wendigo, so it wasn't really a new thing for me, but it was sill great. Your writing is good and I enjoyed your fic. The only thing I have to say is that I think that the part with the memory of Josh teasing Chris, almost kissing him (I think or maybe I'm just a perv XD), was maybe a bit out of place. Since you never talked about it afterward, it looks like there is no reason for this memory to be in this story. Maybe if you said that Chris couldn't shoot Josh because he now knew that he was in love with him etc, it would have been alright. But without that, this part of your story is kind of meaningless. But well, it was a good story, so I will stop complaining. ;) |
Night-Chan-DragonEyes chapter 1 . 10/23/2015 okay, i liked it and i'm not sure why. still, its cool |
IchigoPudding chapter 1 . 9/17/2015 Poor Chris xx |
Nicole Rosales chapter 1 . 9/11/2015 Good this is not completed. Anything can happen right? |
Nicole Rosales chapter 1 . 9/11/2015 I know this will not end this way, I just know it! I sincerely hope it is not the end or I will cry for years to come. |
Nicole Rosales chapter 1 . 9/11/2015 OMG PLEASE DO NOT TELL ME THIS IS THE END OF CHRIS? IF IT IS I WILL CRY FOREVER ;( |
ameranthus13 chapter 1 . 9/11/2015 that ending, them feelz in me! I'm going to cry now TTnTT that ending was pretty interesting though, so Josh was thinking of that? and also...HOW IS THIS NOT A COMPLETED STORY?! will there be more, or is it actually finished *n* great chapter though, pretty twisted but this is the most realistic thing that could happen if Chris ever went back :'( |