Reviews for Your Mess Is Mine
Guest chapter 5 . 11/17/2016
I wish you continued to update this
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
I prefer this story to how the actual show went. Characters are perfectly accurate and believable. Love certain details like Karen showing up for Fitz. Is there going to be more? I hope so.
GeeGee612 chapter 5 . 1/21/2016
This is very good ... is there more ... please say there's more to come. The divorce (not like that mess on the show, though); Karen and Olivia's relationship; and most importantly, OLITZ, how they navigate their relationship through the next 6 months. A trip to Vermont with Karen and Teddy ... all these ideas that you can write! (LOL) I do want to say I think you are one of the best fanfic writers out there. You truly capture the essence that is OLITZ! So THANK YOU for this story!
Laurenaustin4 chapter 5 . 12/10/2015
Hope you update soon great story
Hgfbf chapter 4 . 11/2/2015
Update your himym story please
Stahchild chapter 5 . 10/9/2015
This is how I wanted it to go on the show, with Olivia being able to be her awesome vulnerable self and Fitz finally getting some control back. Thank you for sharing. I love that Olivia has a voice when Mellie tries to talk down to her.
kelleekellkell chapter 5 . 10/7/2015
Thought Liv was gonna pass out! Great update.
ScotchSista chapter 5 . 10/5/2015
What does Fitz know? Nobody tells him anything, not even his daughter. She and Liv have been communicating for a year and neither Karen nor Liv bothered to tell him? Sheesh!

Glad to see Kimberly Mitchell is back. Miss her in canon. Seems like she can relate to tension in a marriage. Well done, Fitz.

While Liv clearly wants to be with Fitz, her apprehension about going public is understandable, although she's getting what she's always dreamed of. Once the world finds out she's the other woman, they both will be pilloried. The Thomas Jefferson/Sally Hemmings comparisons will be raised. People will question if Liv gained favors from the POTUS to start a successful business. She will be called a home wrecker. Fitz will be criticized for choosing Liv over his wife. Lovers of Liberty will rush The White House with pitch forks. It's going to be a mess. I hope our favorite couple can survive all the scrutiny.
BeckyPo chapter 5 . 10/3/2015
I like Karen and Liv's relationship. Of course the Olitz talk throughout and at the end was great too!
chocolate1 chapter 5 . 10/2/2015
The pieces are finally getting put into place. Karen is really being a great help considering all she's enduring. What is it with adults who are surprised that these kids of today are aware about a lot of things LOL! Dang Lizzie is a real piece of work. I despise her on Fitz's team bc we all know she's up to something. Liv needs to give her clarity one of these days :)
Cat chapter 5 . 10/2/2015
So far I'm loving this story! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Puck and Rachel fan chapter 5 . 10/1/2015
Loved it more soonish please

Brandy
Reader575 chapter 5 . 10/1/2015
Just have me smiling from ear to ear. Thank you.
noro chapter 5 . 10/1/2015
So looking forward to read more what a great couple
Guest chapter 5 . 10/1/2015
Loving this story. I wish it happened on the show this way. Please continue.
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