| Reviews for War is where the heart stays, Peace is where the brain never sways |
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   Retro Wolf chapter 1 . 5/19/2016 Yesssss please more more. |
| spartan-140 chapter 1 . 11/3/2015 This is good, it has a lotta potential, I want to see more of David, I'm looking forward to chapter 2 |
| Flashing hot dog chapter 1 . 10/22/2015 Interesting but I need to see more before I give you my full opinion. |
| Azrael Akuma chapter 1 . 10/18/2015 Just gonna give that follow button a click. *Click* Mhmm. |
| yindragonkiba chapter 1 . 10/7/2015 Holy hell that was fuckin awesome |
| kreshryl chapter 1 . 9/27/2015 Woah, that ending was intense. I hope you update again soon, I really like the story. |
| Eclipse1 chapter 1 . 9/15/2015 Very good however how was this war started in the first place? Also the UNSC could in actuality just fire a MAC or us tactical nukes...yeah sorry Shinobi and tailed beast your just done f #$ up big time. Let the Spartans show the true meaning of fear to Danzo and Ibiki. Please update soon, stay writing my friend. |
| cv snowblind chapter 1 . 9/15/2015 this seemes very interesting and i like it... also points for originality and the fluid style of writing no text blobs or hang ups describing anything en mass like an info dump... also that cliffhanger is very nice... i would like to point out that on the 18th line at the very end you have a( /p )there... also there is no such thing as shiranshin (near the end of the chapter). Did you mean Shushin no jutsu or Hirashin (4th hokages own jutsu known only to him and also his bodyguards who need eachother to use it) |
| Densho chapter 1 . 9/14/2015 Ibikis fucked, hope you release the next chapter ASAP! interesting start too. |
