Reviews for A king
Elven21 chapter 8 . 8/24
Hope this update soon. This one of my favorites
bayoujmd89 chapter 9 . 8/10
Patiently wait for an update keep up the good work

PS check out my profile see if there's a challenge on their you or someone you know might be intrested in and let me know thank you
Joshua Rubin chapter 9 . 7/25
Post more chapters
Elven21 chapter 9 . 5/30
I hope you find yourself. Also hope this story catches up to the current clone wars season with the siege of mandalore. Or just make another one all together. Keep up the good work though take your time.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23
Hey motherfucker asshole hurry the fuck up already with a king (naruto & clone wars crossover) already I want to know what happened next when naruto and his army of mandalorian aid the republic forces in the battle of jabiim already
Legalt chapter 1 . 4/23
UGH, TOTALLY RUINED!

Written well. Much better than most on here. Why is it ruined? Because the author had already decided on his pairings then ASKS if people want more. Like, why the F do so many author's pull this crap? What do you think is gonna happen, people will just say one or two? Listen to the reviews and suddenly you're adding the entire cast... God, like you and the other's, you literally ruined your entire damn fic because you want the opinion of your readers regarding the pairing.

Well, like usual when this happens, the fic has massive update gaps or is totally abandoned. Like, how does anyone expect to manage and think of ways to add in so many women without detracting from the romance, character development, and quality? Because unless it's mostly smut or you have the fic planned for AT LEAST 100k words, it'll never work. I've read at least a hundred fics that do this... and only a handful ever truly work out.

Ranting but it's just so annoying to see a GOOD fic do this. Like seriously, you're much better than most on here and can become even better...

Anyway, good luck to you. Maybe if you haven't dealt or added most of the women already, you'll alter your plans and the author note for the harem. It'll be SO much easier to keep up motivation and prevent writers block when you actually have characters that are manageable. Then you can continue your fic and probably be proud that you finished it, as well as knowing how many people really enjoyed and will enjoy it.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 8 . 4/9
One of Naruto women should learn battle meditation. Naruto learn force lightning storm. One his women learn force drain. Shaak Ti become master of force absorb. His women train in Mando armor, weaponry, technology, tactics, etc...that's all I have now.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 7 . 4/9
Maybe a belt fed from deep drum 40mm automatic grenade launcher to shoot out thermal detonators, frag grenades, ion grenades. Once landed mandolorian basilisk battle droids have super A.I. to operate as heavy support for their Mando owner. Mandos could wear power armors similar to Ironman or Batman as far as capabilities not aesthetics. Some heavy Mandos use blasters similar to mini gun cannons. Sniper rail guns, ship mounted rail guns. Mortars that launch thermal, frag, ion detonators. Can't think of anymore weapons.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 6 . 4/9
Will mandalorians use basilisk war droids at times or those tough crafts that punch into ships with invasion forces swarming out for ship take overs? Can you find or recreate the HK series assassin droids with their awesome meatbag dialogues for Naruto to send around killing and some staying near of course for fun? I'm still in the dark about no shinobi, Kurama, nothing from Naruto universe. Naruto should find holocron of mecha deru or what's it called for force commanding technology everything since he's a tech nerd people. Vibro knives as last hold out weapons for melee and throwing, cuts through metals like hot knife thru butter. Nanobots for everything from personnel evolution, super A.I., implanted supercomputer, small personal mountable all purpose droids like from that star wars game, blaster rifles with mounted grenade launchers, ships and other technologies having super A.I. and all connected to the implanted supercomputer in the Mando that owns it, including the basilisk battle droids, HK assassin droids, all battle droids of Mandolor and vehicles. Star Wars type U.A.V. drones. It seems these are all weapons type suggestions my broken brain can think on.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 5 . 4/9
I like the fic, I don't understand using Naruto without any Naruto shinobi powers, no jinchuuriki, no shinobi people, nothing of Naruto verse so far. I'm all for force warriors using blasters, rifles, frag, thermal, ion grenades, flash bangs, any technologies needed for given circumstances makes more sense than only force and lightsabers. For some reason in different fanfics I've read shinobi don't use jutsus or explosive tags like in manga and dark force users readily use the force more during fights than other force warriors. Thanks.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 4 . 4/7
Since timeline is skewed add the A'Daasha twins, Corinna and Kandria.

I've seen nothing here of shinobi abilities. Naruto as MC makes no sense, still waiting for Kurama with other elemental nations chakra characters doing something anything like jutsus, ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu, etc...
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 3 . 4/7
Um not a shinobi...
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 2 . 4/7
How is this Naruto if he's not using shinobi skills? At least he's using force warrior skills with weapons, unlike some other SW fanfics I've seen. I'm reading to hopefully learn what's with lack of shinobi abilities.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 1 . 4/7
I'm seeing no shinobi skills. What gives? I'll read more chapters. Jedi should use the force more than just every once in awhile during battles. Witches of Dathomir needs Naruto, he can learn from the witches too.
bloodbrother 18 chapter 9 . 3/31
Can't wait for more post soon
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