Reviews for Gates of the Universe
stars90 chapter 8 . 4/1
I love this story, and all of what you've done with this universe. Can't wait for more!
frdbrlw1 chapter 4 . 3/29
This makes no sense, a warp core is far inferior to a hyperdrive. Its not even capable of full interstellar travel, let alone transgalactic. Stargate power generation and shield and weapons are far stronger than Star Treks. The condescension towards the Earth government, especially when he tells him there settting up in this reality without even asking permission from the local governments.
And you are seriously underselling ori ships, theres no way you could kill a ORI ships and not take losses after getting hit by there main weapon multiple times.
This smug self righteous attitude from starfleet towards anyone they see as so called primitive and there attitude towards sharing tech, especially considering most of there tech besides the warp drive is scavenged from other species. Its why i could never stand the characters in st, especially picard.
Dactyl chapter 8 . 2/15/2019
This story is awesome, I love Star Trek, and I am also a fan of Stargate, and I love when they get crossed over, and I love it when the proper power of Star Trek ships is used, there's nowhere near enough of it. Please continue!
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 8 . 12/13/2018
A great story here so far! I look forward to reading more!
mwbib chapter 8 . 4/8/2018
Please don't give up on this story, I love it!
Dun1 chapter 7 . 7/14/2016
A 304 even before its unending upgrade could go up against 3 hat'ak class vessels. In the episode when the odyssey got captured in was ambushed in a system with a pulsar which significantly reduced the effectiveness of the shields. Also the first time the ship went up against hat'aks(3 of them) in the episode were Baal was stealing stargates it was not even complete. However it is stated by one of the Lucian Aliance crew that their ship had suffered minor damage and that was just with the rail guns of a 304. So what would have happened if they started throwing their naquida enhanced nukes at them? The Hat'aks do not have close in defensive systems so the missles would have hit. The 304 also has two types of rail guns the first is the big one used in ship to ship engagement and the second is the close in defensive rail guns that fire at Mach 5. The close in defensive rail gun is first seen in the siege of Atlantis where it is mentioned that they were meant to replace the close in defensive system currently used on the Prometheus. In real life rail gun testing has produced speeds of Mach 7. In stargate this tech has been refined and design to go up against Hat'aks which, means that the main railguns of a 304 operate at a much high velocity and in space that is increased again due to the lack of atmosphere.
Dun1 chapter 2 . 7/13/2016
The story has potential but the federation is overpowered. Ha'tak class has a shield that is stronger than the enterprise d but not as strong as the E. Also the Lucian alliance are not stupid enough to do what they did in the story. The 304 is also more powerful than a federation ship, even without Asgard weapons it would pose a significant treat. A ZPM powered 304 can take a hit from a corona mass ejection capable of vaporising a planets surface( corona mass ejections are more powerful than a flare by a huge magnitude) p.s flare easily destroyed dominion vessel in DS9 (check episode where warf avenges his wife's death). And dominion ships are more advanced than federation ships. Also in stargate we have seen an Ori vessel shake off a ramming attack from a Jaffa Ha'tak with no significant problem, but when the enterprise E went up against the scimitar and a piece of debri from the ship hits the enterprises shield it was significantly diminished let's not even mention that the scimitar was going up against 3 ships and the commander was taking it easy trying to toy with his enemy. All am saying is don't make the federation all powerful because Startrek is your favourite show it ruins the whole point of a crossover.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/13/2015
Chapter 4: This warp core business is like comparing internal combustion technology against steam. SG1 has better space drive tech. Makes no sense.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
Chapter 1: Is it really smart to go though a gate that you do not know we're it sends you or how to get back?
DullReign82 chapter 5 . 11/13/2015
Great story so far, I look forward to the next update.
DullReign82 chapter 4 . 11/13/2015
Now that was a space battle!
DullReign82 chapter 3 . 11/13/2015
Your story is a blast to read.
DullReign82 chapter 2 . 11/13/2015
I am so intrigued with this story, and I am going to read more.
DullReign82 chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
I wonder how they plan to get back, I hope they have the return address. Great beginning of story.
ww1990ww chapter 4 . 10/19/2015
And in this case Prime Directive is as usful as Gigantic Ocean of Shit. Tauri has equivalent of Warp Drive so in their case PD don't apply in anyd shape or form.
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