AWWWWWWWWW! SO CUTE!

I think you should make a fluff about their lives together

Oh gosh I wish there was more! The fluff had me swooning

I know you completed this a while back, but I make it a thing to review every fanfic I read.
Oh my goodness, I am totally smitten with your perception of Lolu, two strong characters who just fit. Love it. Such a wonderful story, perfect length. I’ve enjoyed your writing style so much I’m intrigued to read more of your works. Thank you for this little masterpiece.

Oh my gosh... this story is made of pure fluff. Like it's so literally sweet I was grinning happily the entire time I was reading it. I really, really loved this Loke x Lucy story. I love how you delved into his animalistic side, it is so sexy to be honest. I also love how sweet and understanding Lucy is in this fic. I wish we get to see more of them, maybe one shot of that little boy made from their love you teased at the end and Loki just being the perfect lion dad. Awww. Thank you for such an enjoyable read!

Details of lives

would love to see this story continue and watch how they both handle their new lives together. and what story isn't complete without a little fluff here and there

id love for there to be a sequel! i wanna see some fluff and adventures as well as how lucys mortality is effecting loke if at all possible! maybe one of the adventures is to make her not so mortal? id like to see the other spirits reaction to there relationship. that would be initeresting. thank you so much for this wonderful story.

Oooh, could there maybe a new story about their adventures together and maybe some fluff? Though I AM curious to know how Loke handles Lucy's mortality...

AAAAAAAAH THIS WAS AMAZING and seriously this is one of the BEST LoLu fics I've ever read! I'd love to know what kind of shenanigans they get up to next!

I like the Makarov perspective at the end, it was a good way to end the story. I feel so...satisfied right now. Thank you.

Your story is amazing. Authors say that if they have to kiss for you to know that they are in love, you're doing it wrong. The build up to this moment was amazing, and I like how you don't downplay his inhumaness, you cite Lucy's acceptance of it.

If I might make one request...Lucy bragging about her new relationship to Aquarius. Not only does she have a boyfriend, but he is the second highest ranking official in her realm.

This was so lovely! I haven't reviewed some of the chapters between because I was too excited to keep reading. I like how you are slowly going deeper and deeper and for all the star crossed dynamics and power problems that plague this couple, you are capturing them in that moment before those things matter. The moment where Loke is a man and Lucy is a woman and they want to be together. A simple solution for a complex problem. Just be together.

This is the best idea ever! I like how each chapter is a story in it's own right, but set in the same universe and somewhat continuous. You also did a really good job with the Erza/Loke interaction. One of them is suave and always knows what to say, the other is constantly saying everything that comes to mind and gets muddled in social situations. Thanks for such awesome writing.

This is so sweet and natural, I loved it. The shift from light hearted to deep felt a little more forced, but other than that this was perfect! I'm going to read the next chapter now!