YOU MADE ME CRY GOD DAMN IT

Loved every minute of it. It had it's intensr moments...it's light moments and touching moments. It had everything a best seller should have lol. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

This chapter was especially good and exceptionally detailed. The war portion brought back some unpleasant memories but hey I'm home and relatively okay lol. Keep writing this is great.

That is actually a pretty accurate take on the state of situations such as this in this day and age. I liked the way you set everything up. I had a feeling that one of the bartenders was gonna slip one or both of them a drug by the way they nudged each other.

I really hope you are planning on continuing the story. You are an amazing author.

God this fic! It has it all... please update... I'm begging for more! Please!

Jesus, this has been one hell of a fic. I laughed, I cried, I puked in my mouth a little... It moved me, dude. Is there more?

I'm going to be honest here, that last chapter was a bit disappointing. Not because of the cliff hanger but because of how the characters acted. Overall it was a great and well put together story, just the last one a bit off.

Well I didn't like the ending to much, but the rest was pretty good.

Update?

not going to lie i hope mako feels guilty and his pride takes a hold of him enough that he can't bring himself to arrest Korra because that would mean that he got knocked out by someone who was severely wounded and just got back from war. then there is the whole getting beaten up by a girl thing. not that i like using that but i really don't want anything else to happen to these two girls in this story. everything that you have done so far has been great. this was just my opinion. love the story can't wait for the next chapter.

Noooo let them live in peaaaace
*grossly sobs*

Wow I'm speechless. That was a lot of emotion in just one chapter, you're an amazing writer.

love this story!

You know if Korra gets or needs a lawyer they could easily spin it as Korra saw Asami being harassed by her stalker, since Korra didn't do anything until Mako tried to make physical contact, and THEN trying to pull a gun on someone a vet with posttramatic stress disorder (most likely).

Plus cops and cop cars have cameras and mic's on them, where you can obviously see what was said /set off the chain of events. Mako is mostly in the wrong, Korra would probably order to see therapy (and all that jazz) while Mako will probably be either fired, suspended, or put on desk duty until later evaluation...and maybe moved to a different precinct.