Reviews for The Merman
Marley chapter 16 . 1/16/2018
So sweet! I love the ending :)
Crokenator chapter 1 . 1/16/2018
What a first chapter! I love the detail in the descriptions and the word choice! And the way you described the mer was so interesting and graphic and spooky! I could see and smell it, it was great. I'm very excited to continue reading!
Kami chapter 16 . 1/3/2017
THAT WAS SUCH AN AMAZING STORY! You did an amazing job! I can't wait to read it again!
Kami chapter 11 . 1/3/2017
I've not even finished the story and I am already so in love with it!
MidnightRide129 chapter 16 . 10/27/2016
Oh, my, god. This story is a blessing to humanity! U did an amazing job writing this! I loved it!
TheCauldron chapter 16 . 10/22/2016
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing!
Domepotterhead chapter 16 . 10/18/2016
I found your story a couple of days ago, and if I haven't experienced the kind of emotion that leave you without knowing 'what on earth do i do now' after reading a fanfic... believe me, I have now.

That was... it felt... it's just... I cannot put it into words: their first encounter, Haru's backstory, the romance, the loneliness, the desperation and the ending, it was all too much. Personally I ship this couple more than myself with Rin (and that's too hard to confess) and for the first time I have found a fic about them, that made my heart clenched like hell in every frickin' chapter.

It's needless to say that I loved everything from beginning to end.

LOVED IT!

With all my heart.

Gotcha~!
Guest chapter 11 . 9/24/2016
my family and i also say resting bitchy face... we call it rbf so nobody knows what we are saying :)
dandelionsanddaisies chapter 16 . 8/25/2016
Ahhhh nooo I can't believe it's over this is like my favourite fic ever omg ;-; it was so good though, this has been the one fic I've kept reading throughout updates and you should see the way my face apparently (according to my sister) lights up when I get a new notification from you _ I've enjoyed every chapter of this fic and while I'm sad it's over I think you ended it well and you wrote it all amazingly. I look forward to reading more from you _
SweetHeaven chapter 16 . 8/25/2016
OMG this was just sooooooo sweet I can't even... Oh my, it had me squealing and giggling and "awwiwing" all the time!

I like that you started directy with a time lapse and we got to see what happened when Rin took Haru home in a flashback because I believe it gives as the chance to see Rin's feelings in a "calmer" way, without the whole ruch he surely felt at the time.
Rin letting Haru his socks sounds just so absolutely cute for some reason. I have a thing for the whole "wearing boyfriend's clothes" stuff, so Haru wearing Rin's underwear, Rin's hoodie and Rin's socks as shoes sounds so very sexy to me and incredibly sweet at the same time!

I'm glad Rin's family welcomed Haru immediatly and with such kindness. Knowing how much Rin suffered without Haru, it would have been so sad if they hadn't accepted him easily. And Rin's mum buying haru the bathroom caddie was so nice of her. That scene with haru going in the bedroom holding the caddie and kind of speechless was so beautiful. I can see him clutching it tightly and playing with its strings and it's so adorable.

Their time alone at the beach playing their pebbles game was just so funny and they totally gave a happy and cheerful vibe and I enjoyed a lot seeing them like that. It was just so endearing and beautiful...

I really love the idea of Haru working as a swimming teacher. To be honest, I've never seeing him having suh a job in any fic, so it felt kind of new and refreshing! And Haru not understanding why he had to work was a nice, funny way of showing how little he understands about our world, poor him.
I loved the cat going to Haru and Rin thinking he might still smell of fish on a feline level LOL

And ok, the lasr part with haru's necklace was the finally blow. I was officially killed by the cuteness of it all, and especially for the whole deep meaning that something as simple can have for two people with such strong feelings for each other.

The last line was just so perfect.

In general, I can say that this is a really, really, really good story. Top-notch writing, I'm just so in love with your style, honestly. Perfect characterization, which is sometimes difficult when writing AUs. Detailed descriptions that don't get boring at all. Slow-building relationship but not snail-paced, you can keep the interest of your readers. Moving romance, and sweet friendships. And some parts have been so touching that have moved me to tears. I had already added this to my list of Favourite fic and you can be sure that I'm going to add you to my list of favourite authors.
And you have wrapped it up perfectly, the ending was everything I could ask and hope for.
"Fish boy" is just awesome and wonderful and right now I'm cursing my lack of English vocabulary because I can't find a word to describe it that can actually do justice to how much I liked it. 10/10
Warrior Nun chapter 16 . 8/23/2016
-slowly claps evolving to a full on applause- Beautiful...just beautiful!
sakura aesthetic chapter 16 . 8/23/2016
omfg i am so happy with this ending. this is an absolutely breahtaking story and i adored every moment of it. this epilogue had the right mood and the scene was set perfectly. absolute favorite story. thx for writing this
AmbertheCat chapter 16 . 8/23/2016
It was so sweet. I love how this ended. Do you take requests?
EllatheYoukai chapter 16 . 8/23/2016
This is such an amazing story, with incredible detail and a great plot! I loved it so much!
sofiashak chapter 14 . 8/23/2016
You made me cry TTuTT
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