Reviews for The Writer Games
Guest chapter 50 . 8/17
I think I've reread this about ~5 times in the last ~3 years, but I don't think I've ever written a review.
It's certified kino. Top of the shelf stuff. Definitely the best piece of romance I've ever read (even though I barely read any).
Thank you very much for writing this, and I wish you the best.
Mader Levap chapter 67 . 1/19
Two prompts.

1. Nature of Salem and Ozpin is common knowledge. Here challenge lies in making it meaningful within story. Anyone could do generic fanfic where you have character offhandedly throw out "Wonder what that creepy immortal bastard is up to, I heard they gave him Beacon to rule over. Scary." or discussing latest movements of Salem's forces in bar.

2. Aura is not routinely unlocked asap because it causes 100% infertility without known cure. Finally good reason that has nothing to do with Grimm!
Obviously, A LOT changes for all affected parties, and not just rearranging family trees either. High drama potential due to choices made by kids that in many cases will end with regret in future as they mature and priorities change. That would also perfectly explain blase attitude to coed dormitories, sleepovers etc in Beacon.

As a bonus, my RBWY headcanon: they don't have separate restrooms. Just one bigger and without urinals for obvious reasons.
dragooner chapter 57 . 10/10/2019
Cough, Cough Cursed Child cough.

My feeling about time travelling kids.
TheUnHolySmirk chapter 47 . 10/9/2019
Feels very "In the Kingdom's Service"
Bartholemeow chapter 64 . 6/4/2019
I can imagine it now.
Russel- no one.
*Six hours late and some much deserved screaming*

Russel- prefer not to say.
DragonLark chapter 21 . 12/20/2018
In the interests of everyone thinking it, would Jaune have "Crashed and Burned" while flirting with Weiss?
ezik chapter 67 . 11/25/2018
i lile how alot of these prompts get used XD
JokerX6 chapter 51 . 11/21/2018
For some reason I really enjoyed this prompt
JokerX6 chapter 8 . 11/21/2018
I just started reading this collection and I can't believe how interesting this prompt/ficlet? is. I kinda think this could be much darker, like Jaune's parents attempting a rescue but failing, Jaune refusing to treat 'someone important' and letting them die... Or something like that
RotWS chapter 16 . 9/11/2018
For best results, is it okay if I don't publicly admit the connection between the fic and this prompt until the phobia reveal?
RotWS chapter 9 . 9/11/2018
Would obviously require major changes, given the whole Salem situation, but it could be made to work.
RotWS chapter 7 . 9/11/2018
And I thought you said you wouldn't write the prompts in this. Between From Beyond, Dead Man Walking, and The Entertainer, you and Coeur are definitely writing some of them.
RotWS chapter 3 . 9/11/2018
Yoinked. Would require changes due to the Blake, Ren, and Raven backstory revalations, but I'm already getting ideas.
Exploding sword chapter 58 . 7/3/2018
This is more of a booking comment ,but I'm kind of sad this wasn't a idea about jaune opening up a pizza restaurant.
Better ingredients Better pizza Papa Jaune's
Ashleythetiger chapter 10 . 6/29/2018
I dont really comment but reading the bit about Jaune being the father makes me think of a few coincidences that Jaune could use to hid that fact, then use the excuse he flirts badly to avoid relationships, he pukes on Yang, she gives him a nickname an basically friend zones him due to that, Ruby gets friend status, Nora has eyes for Ren, Pyrrha could be considered safe due to being a celebrity, Blake solves it by not really speaking much to people, an Weiss shuts him down every time he asks.

Just some odd things I noticed.
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