This was base on one of my favorite episodes. Nice story. I hope to see you write more.

I hope this has inspired you to write more! Will be looking for your next story.

I knew it, I knew TD was going to show up! Good thing you did!

The Chief had a point. They would do everything they could if it was Fran do he would not do it any differently with someone else he cares about.

Wonder of somehow TD is going to show up at the scene?

I was expecting something like this. Hop he gets there in time.

Happy to see another Ironside writer! Glad you're giving it a try. Good start so far!

Yes, please, write on! It's great to have you on board here! You managed to put your feelings and your care into a fine story. Kudos!

Sue-A great
story hope
to read more
from you