What Kevin did was pretty awesome! I also hoped that Rath would yell more though, but otherwise it was pretty good!

This is personal for me but I don't like the gay stuff you're suggesting for Julie and Kai. Otherwise, pretty good chapter

Wow great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

I can't believe you had Gwen crush on her cousin! That's so gross! They're family! That should NEVER happen! It's inappropriate! I'm not even gonna finish reading this series (in fact I stopped reading after she confessed!). I really wish you stuck with her just wanting to protect her cousin and not anything more.

Damn, long time, no read, lol. Can’t deny I started missing this story, as there’s not that many Ben and Hope stories out there. Highkey got hyped when I saw you update, and 3 chapters at that too.

The dynamic between these three is definitely interesting, now more than ever considering Ben is incapacitated at the moment. But seeing we’ve never really seen these three specifically interacting (unless it’s some sort of fight), you write their dynamic quite well and very in character to how’d they be, in this scenario anyway.

The trials themselves were an intriguing process. Quite like the idea of going off individually to face whatever the trial attempts to throw at you, whether it’d be fear or something you face from the past. Just an interesting concept in general.

Also nice to see Gwen get somewhat of a catharsis with her realisation of Ben and Hope’s relationship. All it took was Ben dying and then having to travel to some dimension to bring Ben back to life. Better late than never, I suppose. I lowkey hope Hope and Gwen can at least try to get along after this.

Great chapter(s) overall. Till next time!

And that's all you need to pass...

So Gwen learns her mistakes and finally accepts Ben and Hope's relationship

Hell yeah my first fanfiction is back haha

C16 now or not even a creation spell can bring you back from the torture you will endure

It is a very good story I am totally hooked great work friend

Es una muy buena historia Estoy totalmente enganchado gran trabajo amigo

You probably thought of it and decided not to use the idea but I thought I should mention that Gwen or Max could've put the Omnitrix on and used alien x,but also besides that the Omnitrix has a failsafe that turns Ben into whatever alien he needs to survive a normally fatal attack,but even so I love the story and hope you continue

Please release chapter 16 soon I'm dying here.
p.s. The story has been amazing so far but chapter 14 wasn't the best.

I can tell this is going to be good

A year later, and I just discovered the cliffhanger here. Please finish this story! I've gotta see how Gwen makes up for what she's done when they find Ben!

Aye, chapter 1, seems great, first few lines feel kinda off though. Can't really visualise Gwen and Ben talking like that. But hey, there's 14 more chapters