Boooooooooooo!

Huh. You know, in some ways, Nooroo being the villain makes more sense than Gabriel. At least, it doesn't rely on the villain being a moron.

In canon, Gabriel's plan was to be a villain to make Ladybug and Chat Noir show up as heroes; this is standard story logic. His second step is to beat them and take their miraculous... But in story-logic the villain never wins. He utterly failed to think his plan through.

You used "of doom" at least three times in this chapter to describe different things. You should probably either mix it up with other descriptions, or find a way to turn it into a joke.

You know, the way that Ladybug and Chat Noir try to call each other in canon would make a lot more sense if the Kwamis WERE able to relay messages...

you dont have to try to keep it pg. my 4 year old brother watches endgame regularly

you have to finish the story plz the storys are best done by the original authority

omg love this the whole time i was fangirling and squealing even tho that moment with tikki and plagg was so serious i'm still can't get over when Marinette finally kissed Adrien.

Awhhh nooooo sad, but I get it

its marinette not marionette

I know it has been a long time, but I really love this series! I hate to see it end with the most dramatic cliffhanger of all time! I will literally never go to sleep knowing that such a detailed fan fiction ends so sadly. Please, continue, at least make one last chapter please. Just to tie the loose ends together, and give this series a sense of completion. I would greatly appreciate if you would find it in you to continue this delightful series.

-A Sad Reader /3

P.S. I think you have a real talent in writing, it's almost as if I could visualise the scenario that has taken place. At one point, when I was begging to read this series, I went out to lunch, I thought about this series, and was confused about whether it was a real episode, or a fan fiction. It was a real pleasure reading this series, and I hope to read more in the future.

she will want adrien to noin her but he wont and marianette will try to destroy him but he will talk his way out of it and kiss ser and chloe will cry at this sight but getting one more glimpse of marionette she will run and tikki and, plague swill take care of evvil and yay the end
Is that about right? That is sorta what it seams like also
Chat blak and missfortune? Someone read too many fanfics but good very descriptive

I hate you! Jk! But. Come on! Finish the fricking story

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that was the moust amazing thing i have ever read cant waite for next chapter

I'd just like to point out that Chat Noir isn't a sidekick, but they are equals