Reviews for Correcting a Mistake
LeahMfkn'Clearwater chapter 1 . 12/28/2019
Wow. I fucking loved this. Uzumaki restoration is all I’ve ever wanted! Amazing story and writing!
inder chapter 1 . 12/19/2019
lol that was some serious story you made honestly i think it would have better if they were to cut sasukes d*ck first than take his eyes and than kill him
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2019
You mentioned a 2nd chapter back in September 2015, can we expect it to be released in September 2019?

That would give you roughly 4 months to get it done, as I suspect it's just a Smut chapter.

;-P
Dark Mage Wyvern Lord chapter 1 . 6/28/2018
I agree with a lot of how you portrayed Sasuke. Despite my dislike for Naruto marrying Hinata at the end of the series, this story deserves a sequel, like Sarada coping with taking her first life.
graynita chapter 1 . 1/13/2018
It's fine to dislike Sasuke and all, but this is disgusting.
graynita chapter 1 . 1/13/2018
Its fine to dislike Sasulw but this is just disgusting.
Dragonfan6 chapter 1 . 10/7/2016
Not a fan of what happened to Hinata. But a great story non the less, especially sense Naruto has pretty much become the new Sage of six paths, and also thanks for not bashing Sakura. I know people don't seem to like her that much bUT can someone honestly say she's that bad to be hated by all? Anyway getting off topic, Naruto is a bad as and deserves all the good shit to come to him in life from OP upgrades, to haems of beautiful women, and whatever else that can be a way of things going his way. And I would really like to see more stories like that. So please keep on going with your amazing work that I can honestly say I'm jealous of
Team7sannin123 chapter 1 . 9/26/2016
This is the worst fucking fan-fiction I've ever read.

And no, it's not because I'm a Sasuke fan or a Sasuhina fan for the matter.

It's because you dare to do the lowest thing a writer could have done in their entire career.

Making Sasuke rape Hinata and GANG-RAPE FUCKING KARIN without any believable reason, motivation nor explanation that's not beyond ‘durr i hat sauce so much i'm going to make him a rapist, i'm the adult i do adult things, imma so edgy’?

This is the thing that enrages me the most about this filth. You dare to use rape as a mere goddamn plot-device! Nothing else!

THAT IT'S UNJUSTIFIABLE!

YOU TAKE THIS REAL, TRAUMATIZING ISSUE THAT MANNY PEOPLE UNFORTUNATELY GO THROUGH THEIR LIVES, AND YOU EXPLOIT IT, SIMPLY TO BASH A CHARACTER THAT YOU HATE? ABSOLUTELY FUCKING REPULSIVE.

On top of everything, this story it's poorly written, has several grammatical issues, and SO MUCH MORE.
DarkBlackDragon06 chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
Awesome story looking forward to more
holothewolf16 chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
it was really, really, really good... though personaly I would have made his suffering last SO much LONGER. the stuff he was planning deserved far more than what he got in my opinion
Knightoftime chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
Whoop, talk about intense... What's sad is, I feel this could be a possible scenario... Sadly I've only watched like two episodes of the first season and like 3 or 4 of shippuden and lets just say...I fully believe sasgay would pull shit like this...other then the horrible center this revolved around, this is like really well-done, and I can say I'll have to add you guys at shattered realm productions, as an inspiration for any and all writings I do, also I'm gonna look at your other works on the site.
Silber D. Wolf chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
great
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
cool
AbandonedAccount12 chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
This was pretty awesome for a one-shot Sasuke Bashing story. Hell, I liked this better VFSNAKE's story for Sasuke Bashing month.
jacememoryadeptbeleren chapter 1 . 10/4/2015
Beautiful a good end for the month. I truly apologize for not reviewing or responding early of the month.
Truly a story worthy to be in the stars.
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