Reviews for Correcting a Mistake |
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LeahMfkn'Clearwater chapter 1 . 12/28/2019 Wow. I fucking loved this. Uzumaki restoration is all I’ve ever wanted! Amazing story and writing! |
inder chapter 1 . 12/19/2019 lol that was some serious story you made honestly i think it would have better if they were to cut sasukes d*ck first than take his eyes and than kill him |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2019 You mentioned a 2nd chapter back in September 2015, can we expect it to be released in September 2019? That would give you roughly 4 months to get it done, as I suspect it's just a Smut chapter. ;-P |
Dark Mage Wyvern Lord chapter 1 . 6/28/2018 I agree with a lot of how you portrayed Sasuke. Despite my dislike for Naruto marrying Hinata at the end of the series, this story deserves a sequel, like Sarada coping with taking her first life. |
graynita chapter 1 . 1/13/2018 It's fine to dislike Sasuke and all, but this is disgusting. |
graynita chapter 1 . 1/13/2018 Its fine to dislike Sasulw but this is just disgusting. |
Dragonfan6 chapter 1 . 10/7/2016 Not a fan of what happened to Hinata. But a great story non the less, especially sense Naruto has pretty much become the new Sage of six paths, and also thanks for not bashing Sakura. I know people don't seem to like her that much bUT can someone honestly say she's that bad to be hated by all? Anyway getting off topic, Naruto is a bad as and deserves all the good shit to come to him in life from OP upgrades, to haems of beautiful women, and whatever else that can be a way of things going his way. And I would really like to see more stories like that. So please keep on going with your amazing work that I can honestly say I'm jealous of |
Team7sannin123 chapter 1 . 9/26/2016 This is the worst fucking fan-fiction I've ever read. And no, it's not because I'm a Sasuke fan or a Sasuhina fan for the matter. It's because you dare to do the lowest thing a writer could have done in their entire career. Making Sasuke rape Hinata and GANG-RAPE FUCKING KARIN without any believable reason, motivation nor explanation that's not beyond ‘durr i hat sauce so much i'm going to make him a rapist, i'm the adult i do adult things, imma so edgy’? This is the thing that enrages me the most about this filth. You dare to use rape as a mere goddamn plot-device! Nothing else! THAT IT'S UNJUSTIFIABLE! YOU TAKE THIS REAL, TRAUMATIZING ISSUE THAT MANNY PEOPLE UNFORTUNATELY GO THROUGH THEIR LIVES, AND YOU EXPLOIT IT, SIMPLY TO BASH A CHARACTER THAT YOU HATE? ABSOLUTELY FUCKING REPULSIVE. On top of everything, this story it's poorly written, has several grammatical issues, and SO MUCH MORE. |
DarkBlackDragon06 chapter 1 . 4/6/2016 Awesome story looking forward to more |
holothewolf16 chapter 1 . 12/25/2015 it was really, really, really good... though personaly I would have made his suffering last SO much LONGER. the stuff he was planning deserved far more than what he got in my opinion |
Knightoftime chapter 1 . 12/10/2015 Whoop, talk about intense... What's sad is, I feel this could be a possible scenario... Sadly I've only watched like two episodes of the first season and like 3 or 4 of shippuden and lets just say...I fully believe sasgay would pull shit like this...other then the horrible center this revolved around, this is like really well-done, and I can say I'll have to add you guys at shattered realm productions, as an inspiration for any and all writings I do, also I'm gonna look at your other works on the site. |
Silber D. Wolf chapter 1 . 10/17/2015 great |
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 10/17/2015 cool |
AbandonedAccount12 chapter 1 . 10/9/2015 This was pretty awesome for a one-shot Sasuke Bashing story. Hell, I liked this better VFSNAKE's story for Sasuke Bashing month. |
jacememoryadeptbeleren chapter 1 . 10/4/2015 Beautiful a good end for the month. I truly apologize for not reviewing or responding early of the month. Truly a story worthy to be in the stars. |