I'm so lucky to find this it's you know I'm looking forward for your rin tohsaka another story

This is so sweet and well-written!

Great Job. This was awesome.

THIS IS CANON. It is that good, yes, like seriously everyone is so "in-character" you did a terrific job! I enjoyed the hell out of this and at the end I was left wanting to read more. I wish one day you could continue this, showing how their relationship keeps growing, from being both tsundere, shy and always blushing, to the mature relationship they have in the final episode of the anime, when they feel really comfortable with each other. Thanks!

So cute! Loved it

Awww that was sooooo adorable! Thanks for the treat XD

That's just like Rin. Gosh, they're both adorable in their own ways.

aaah! they melted my heart! you so gooood

Cute. My heart melted at the first section; it was so adorable! You're a talented writer!

I now have several cavities.

A wonderful, fun romance fic filled with excellent gooey goodness, all while still keeping the cast in character. Sweet :-)

~ Elsil

Not bad, not bad at all!

Damn. I was giggling through most of this fic. The type of giggle you give when you're happy and embarrassed and holy shit this was like cotton candy made from rainbows it was so sweet.

Wow, this was great. Definitely faving this.

Loved it!