we want more please

wish you would continue this. I actually love this story and where it's going.

Please update the story author-chan

Damn, wished you continued this. Especially with Gears 5 coming soon

Do you plan on updating this if so let us know and please don't be like those people who make a story that gets a audience then just up and leave it

i have to say this but both walking dead game and shows are in the same universe just different charaters

HAREMS!
I like how alucard would rape the locust but the sekirei, Dc, and marvel characters wouldn’t
Also I have a lot of suggestions for worlds and for new locust, but I really don’t want to leave a 20 something page review especially when even this has character limits on what you can type, so either you or Phoenixlord42 can message me about them

If Naruto despises rapists, how exactly is he breaking the women into serving him (assuming all of them need to be broken)?

Just for the record, when fucking a “backdoor” your fucking a woman’s ass, not her pussy. Yet you switched between the two with no mention of Naruto doing so

Also, Kumo should be putting up the most fight since not only is A a near army killer, but Bee and Yugito have their bonus to aid them

Oh, you should have female locust since they can breed with the likes of Itachi and Kisame

If you want you could have Hinata’s mother be naruto’s Toy. And if you want to be really mean to Hinata, you could breed her with some of the beasts, Therons, Stalkers, and such so that a variety of Naruto’s forces have the byakugan for scouting and infiltration

Hayate got impaled by some type of Attorney?

I’d say have Hinata, Hanabi, their mother (usually an oc), natsu Hyuga, and an oc for Neji’s mother be maids and toys for Naruto and his girls’ enjoyment. I could see Kurenai wanting to get some sexual release through Hinata after training her for so long and being around her.

Hehe, you want new locust? I can give ya that

The Akamichi clan head is Choza, Choujuro is Mei’s swordsman bodyguard

Gravelly voice would probably make more sense unless the attackers were Tharon Guards

You didn’t name RAAM

Wouldn’t it be “My Queen, my Lady, your majesty” or some such and not my mistress? Mistress tends to imply they have no royal title or such. Even Darth Vader addressed Palpatine as “My Emperor” when speaking to him

In regards to the last locust Naruto fought at 10: It would be nothing scared him, not nothing feared him

Heh, you should have Hana be an actual wife and Tsume be a pet for Naruto. I can just see him walking her through the places naked except a collar and leash

great story maybe send them to invade the some DC comics areas

Can you please do this story for me I searched it up on google and fanfiction and it hasn't been done It’s not exactly a chalenge because I didn’t pm you but I would have done it my self but I don’t have an account so I was hoping you would do it?

It’s called FALLING FEARLESSLY INTO THE FLAMES.
It’s a crossover between for honor and how to train your dragon 1 through race to the edge and 2 it’s where a warmongering raider dies betrayed by his own people but he doesn’t die from a simple stab from an axe and turns around rips it out of his muscular back and grips the handle of his giant axe and charges forward rage fueling his strikes killing all his people but is left fataly wounded he dies but is reborn in httyd verse as the brother of hiccup the weakling while hiccup is a disappointment he is the perfect Viking looking nothing like his brother with his huge mass and deep voice and massive arms looking like he could rip a dragons head off with his bare hands alone.

By the way to make the story more realistic on how he has such a huge size I would make him eat a specific type of meat and vegetable that messes with the cells in his body making it extremely durable and strong.

Also for the pairing I always hated the Astrid and hiccup relationship it was so dumb and weird hiccups is a frail man who can’t fight anything and Astrid is a violent Viking who beats up guys four times her own height on a daily bases even without her dragon she would have become an extremely awesome Viking if not for hiccup who is always hiding behind his dragon forcing his entire team to do the same making Astrid rusty and is the main reason she gets captured so often.

So yeah I honesty hate soft hearted fanfics And I like fics where the main character is an absolute badass who doesn’t take shit from anyone not even his own girlfriend!

So anyway this not a challenge but I honestly want to see this fanfic so please write this.

update

I said again kuroinu is the next world for naruto and his army

I go with kuroinu for the next world for naruto and the horde to attack

Can't wait for chapter 4!