Reviews for Under the Southern Cross |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your stories seem so true to the original characters persona! Love them! Hope you'll let us know if/when you write original fiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww. I love Luna! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story, just right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet. Such lovely visual writing and the blunt dialogue is just like Luna |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read it once but now I read it again... I just want to say this story is just cute in every way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story, and SO in character for Luna! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not perhaps my favourite of your pieces, though as always well written I just don't have a great deal of investment in Rolf, but it is delightful to see Luna (and Rolf) get their happy ending and it happens in just the fashion it should. |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUUUUUUUUUUL. God bless. Who are you, you genius you? Gah. You 100% have characterization on point. I loved it. THANK YOU. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah this was lovely! I've never really thought much about Luna and Rolf as a couple (to be honest I always kind of shipped her and Neville) but this was really well written. Luna was perfectly in character and Rolf was adorably awkward. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I LOVE this! Phenomenal! Luna and Rolf are just perfect for each other! And perhaps this is a small thing, but I rather liked your description of Rolf's flask as dented. What a great image, this man who travels the world for sheer love of magical creatures, through all sorts of unforgiving environments, drinking from a flask that would show that he's brought it with him through all of it. Great story! You haven't marked this complete; is this a story you plan to continue? |
![]() ![]() This is really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is nice :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this one-shot |