Reviews for The Legendary One
ice cream of the gods chapter 1 . 7/14
I hope you realize that as soon as yo gave him stats higher than zero most people lost interest in the story? You could've been as strong as fucking Hercules before you got your falna and they would still be at zero, the "0" is the baseline it's not a representation of your actual "stats", unless your saying that for some reason he's been part of his grandfathers familia for most of his life, there was no need to give a boost, you could've just made him experienced in fighting and have had him actually train before going to Orario. you've instead mad him into a Gary stu, for whatever reason. Not saying fic is bad, just telling you some stuff for whatever you do in future, cheers :)
Dylandidi10 chapter 6 . 6/7
I got bored, it's too classic... Bell, who spends his time seducing and who has become strangely calculating in his relationships, has lost all his charm and purity. If it's not for appearance and strength, I don't even see why Aiz is interested in him as he is here.
Madara chapter 11 . 3/6
U r a fcking moron do u know that those 2 beat the shit of of him and then without any payback they just ran away u fcking idiot die u fcking half brain dead moron
daemon452 chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
As soon as I hit the stats part I knew this was going to be bad and it did not disappoint.
Juan Diego Cornejo chapter 13 . 11/26/2019
para cuando la segunda temporada
FriggleBerry chapter 1 . 10/8/2019
Bruh, what’s the point of making him overpowered as fuck but having him be weak all the time that’s the dumbest shit ever. I love the idea of this story but it’s very poorly executed
FriggleBerry chapter 1 . 10/8/2019
Pretty sure in every single thing ever S-SS are MAX and maybe SSS never in any game,novel or otherwise have I seen 4 S for any single star ever and when a person joins a familia they always start 0 no matter how strong
aSleepyPenguin chapter 4 . 7/25/2019
3? There was only 2.

Does this include Aizu from a few days ago? (Or earlier)
Uzumaki D. Dragon chapter 1 . 6/28/2019
This story has one of worst plot i have ever seen First you make him way too powerful as he must be more powerful than even the gods if he is son of more ancient beings. Then you say he is not op because everyone else is also going to get powerboost. Then whata was the point of all those stats and such.
Neededsomething chapter 1 . 6/16/2019
If you weren't aware when a Adventurer is given a Falna no matter who they are or how powerful they are all of their stats are 0, any stat listed or gained is done so after having a Falna.
Ruberforumfree chapter 1 . 4/15/2019
...bullshit, be needs a limit for controlling his strength, and it's just conveniently into his skills set? That just stinks of bad plot.
ethan.lukkar chapter 13 . 4/10/2019
Magnificent chapter can’t wait for more please update soon
Eragon1928374655 chapter 13 . 4/9/2019
nonononononono

NOT LIKE THIS NOOOOO :(
Eragon1928374655 chapter 11 . 4/9/2019
*sees cliffhanger*

Oh you better STAHP

BITCH STAHP

STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHPPPPP
Eragon1928374655 chapter 10 . 4/9/2019
you fucking dummy bell just set it to 100% when they switch and fuck em both up!
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