It is sad that you will be taking the cancelled stories down. I've always figured that history should be preserved even at small scales. But now I know which stories of yours to enjoy first. Hope you continue writing and life treats you fairly. Have a good day!

That's understandable, I want to continue some of the stories but I know I won't even write it despite it my desire.

Don't cancelled this story, I still got those deleting requests for some time now. Plus I like your Index story.

Sorry to bother you again but, deleting request here, this too as usual.

Wow, sounds like Uiharu has been having a worst day ever. All that stress combined with less sleep and her feelings of inadequate is a recipe for a explosion waiting to happen. The loss of school work really sucks, but surely Uiharu should have had cloud backup for some of the mobile games?

Fukiyose must be really bored if she has nothing better to do than beat up the Delta Force outside of school. She should be careful in that case, some people could think there is an assault going on. I don't recall Fukiyose and Uiharu crossing paths in the original story. Curious to see if more will come from that.

There that fun scientific angle exploring what Uiharu can do with her powers, mention this story's namesake. Uiharu's power is quite crazy when you think about it. She can keep the temperature of something she is holding fixed. That is basically saying she can freeze chemical reactions, since thermodynamics play such an important role. As Mikoto shows, the limits on one's ability is related to how creative you can be with it.

Oh dear. Even if they are talking about you, following the strange men to find out what they are doing without any backup or support is quite risky. Stealth is also not Uiharu's specialty. It might have been smarter to get to a computer and start hacking some cameras instead of following them directly.

Here come that weird drug that boosts a Esper's performance while also having negative side effects on a person's mind. I really don't want to think about what they plan to do with it. I almost feel bad for the skill out thugs selling it.

It was smart of Uiharu to try to record the exchange, but too bad they were prepared for it and fried the data. Too bad Uiharu couldn't have tried to stream the video anywhere. It shows how much influence the group those two work for has if they can influence programs in a Garden school.

Fukiyose is certainly getting more spotlight early on. I never really trusted that disembodied voice that she heard, but learning who it might have belonged to makes it even worse. So Fukiyose would be just one of 7. DO you plan to make Uiharu on of the 7 as well? We gets some more teasing with Maximillian I see. We have some organization names and the fact he crossed paths with Aliester previously. Lets see what kind of chaos he bring to Academy City.

Don't forget the deleting request, this too when you finally get the chance.

Number six's impersonator and Touma's love interest in the future. Also, I left out a couple of things:

"Anyway, you destroy whatever video she recorded. is missing a " and Mourning Star is 'Morning'.

REJOICE I HAVE DONE! DRINKS ON ME! Since I read the first version it's kind of nice to see small changes to make things better and such.

Noted. Meanwhile, I got you a remake version of my OC:

Name: Hasekura Tamaki

Epithet: Pantera

Age: 18

Height: 183 cm

Classification: Esper, Gemstone

Occupation: 3rd-year Student (A Certain Middle-High School)

Appearance: A beautiful young woman with a black bob cut, blue eyes, tan skin on her dynamite body and the exact bust size as Beverly Seethrough's. Wears her school uniform like most students in Academy City, sometimes on casual clothes that suits her looks and beauty. For crime-fighting; she wears a black spandex catsuit with a front zipper, a utility belt for certain advantages, knee-high boots, gloves, a catwoman mask and orange goggles to hide her eye colors.

Personality and Background, I'll leave those to you.

Esper powers: Overdrive: an adrenal activating ability that enhances strength, speed, reflexes, senses and resistance to pain.

Level: 4

Other abilities: Highly trained in Martial arts combined with athletics or acrobatics, has an I.Q. of around 200, an accuracy of over 120, predicts her opponent's moves like chess, checkers or shogi, and speaks many languages including the extinct ones.

If you're wondering, she acts as one of the Number 6's impersonators like Kanou Shinka. Anyway, I have three more things:

1. Where does this story take place?

2. RPGPersona wasn't the one who brought up Touma you know.

3. "Eh, oh its Uiharu Kazari." should be 'it's'.

Deleting request there, this too.

Delete the two edits as well, this too again.

Edit 3: with the exact bust size as Beverly Seethrough's.

Edit 1: she wears a black spandex catsuit that almost look like a Black Crow bodysuit with a catwoman mask and black goggles to hide her eye colors.

Edit 2: and can easily anticipate her opponent's move like chess or checkers.

If you're wondering what my OC's for, she acts as an impersonator for the number six like Kanou Shinka.

Third chapter, villains. And the train of Uihira! Can't wait until the chapter

Oooh a rewrite this should be exciting while I thought that the original was pretty good I can't wait to see some of the changes and what will be the same hope you update soon