Yes

When one has to use context clues to figure out what the sentence should say, you need to work on spelling, grammar, and tense usage.

Idk if English is your main language, but there are errors in spelling all over this chapter.

PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON!

Ugh

Good story but it is just written so poorly , I just don’t know if I want to read a quarter million word story that does not flow or even make sense at times, was willing to read even though I don’t like the pairing , but at least I tried.

Please add Lucci! I get that he's a total ass, but that just has to do with what happened to him and the others. Plus he becomes a bit better after Luffy beats his ass. At least until he becomes a member of CP0.

This is terrible , one of the worst written fics I ever started to read

I really like this you should do more of this

Que história ruim... A escrita está um lixo, aprenda a fazer história primeiro antes de postar uma porcaria como essa!

You have a lot of grammar errors, but great story other wise

Bruh, not to be rude but uhh is English your first language? I mean here's one example "Jerks! I'm not a little anymore and I definitely don't afraid anyone.!"
Yeah good plot and storyline but couldn't finish due to bad grammar, sorry.

English motherfudger do you speak it?

Great story but I couldn’t finish due to cringe at improper grammar, loved the actual story though

PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON!