This is a really great story! You write well!

Oh my God BUT I WANNA KNOW HOW THAT SITUATION CAME TO BE!

And I LOVED this story! So much! :D :D :D

XD Okay, I'm really loving this.

I so love this. xD

Great chapter!

Awesoooome! He's badass xD

Why is everybody lost? I began to wonder if this was some kind of huge metaphor like they were some lost souls and they would end up joining a cult but please don't let that happen x3

The part when Zoro thought a nap would make everything better made me laugh. I could relate to it. I also like the description of deer Chopper carrying his books because it sounded cute to me. As for the marines, I'm not sure if I'm fond of the idea of a child marine- especially two. Child marines patrolling a town seem random to me. But I guess you're a random person which is the best type of person. The marines are written in the way I wanted them to be written. As average guys. Well done with the first chapter.

Your story has personality to it. Nice job. It made me smile.

I'm so confused at this new developement! And yay, they're not lost anymore! XD

Ahahaha! This is hilarious! XD Since it's about them being lost, he's gonna get them even more lost, isn't he...? *rofls*

This story is very interesting so far! And really funny xD But Nami getting lost? That seems unbelievable even to me; she always knows the way! And the bottom part confused me, why'd you put that part in twice? Well anyhow I can't wait to see the update! I would love to see how far you go with this story! I wonder where Luffy and the others are...hmm.