Wonderful job. Love it.

Excellent story, good plot, good characterizations.

I really loved your story. I like the cross over idea. I hope you do more. Thanks :-)

I love the reason for Eliot being born first, having shoved Jake aside to determine if it was safe or not - too funny and so Eliot!

Wonderful job working both sides of the fandoms. Love how they were twins so everything worked out. Liked how you worked in Elliot's past, and reactions to killing. It should never be easy.

Okay, this is pretty darn good! I wasn't sure at first, but you nailed it! Awesome job!

sooooo Eliot, just love these lines between him and Jake:
"Only because you shoved me out of the way."
"Had to be sure it was safe."

Interesting cross, on to the sequel

#grinning happily

Now it was an Awesome fic!
Brotherly fic always fun to read!
Especially Identical Twins who cares about each other... ;))

They go together!

I enjoyed this. Of course it had 2 of my favorite characters-Eliot and Jake. I wish I could have watched it because, CHRISTIAN KANE!