My friend and I read this together and I had to hide my boner. You are an amazing writer. Didn't know things this short could be this good (that's what she said).

Wow , I never thought something so short could be so amazing, Love it

Hm. Evil Peridot works in these stories. But honestly…I WANT HER TO DO THAT TO ME! Or Jasper. Sorry if that sounds weird I just love those two like they are real. ! :)

Wtf?! The web says that you have updated, but chapter 2 doesn't appear.

Nice, short and sweet . Btw peridot is a girl, but that's ok. Your fanfic, your idea. Nice job.

*drools*

welcomes you with open arms, DZ.

really short, but still pretty good.