Reviews for Angel and Dragon re-write
NatsuChad chapter 12 . 7/11
Not gonna lie to you, this chapter was the worst so far imo. And before this comes across wrong, I just want to say that I really enjoyed the story so far and fell in love with the new Natsu and Sorano. But for that exact reason I feel the need to give my opinion on this chapter.

So as to give some context on why I have problems with this chapter. I am personally a fan of a mature Natsu and I thought you protrayed that very well with how he handled the consequences of protecting Sorano. And their relationship didn't feel rushed or forced. In general both were cery likeable and as a reader I just wanted the best for them. Seeing them struggle made them relatable.

However with the Natsu and Sorano from this chapter I can't relate at all, which is the root of my problems with this chapter. There were all these problems and struggles Sorano went through, which build up emotion for me as a reader. And instead of adressing any of them we just kinda are supposed to accept them and see the good. Which might work for some readers. But I find it very hard to believe that this once very protective Natsu was just able to look past not only the Celestial King attacking Sorano but also Cobra coming after her as well. And to add on to that Natsu this very family driven person, was just happy to see he had a daughter (which is fine on the surface) meanwhile ignoring the 6 years of life of his first daughter he missed out on and also not being able to protect her either. What I would have hoped for and was expecting was more a feeling of guilt, anger, sadness and pain.

Now for Sorano I don't have much of a problem with, considering she is already OOC. But we were introduced to all these insecurities (like the age gap) and hardships (like the fights). And instead of them talking it out and heal those emotional wounds, it is portrayed as if they never existed.

What I had wished myself from this chapter would be some alone time between Sorano and Natsu. In which Natsu for one would be able to come to terms with his new life and all the pain that happened to Sorano which he promised to protect her from. And Sorano to open up about her hardships and find a way to move past them. And even for Joy to have her own plot of where she needs to learn to accept this stranger as her father and to be able to bond.

Now I am not blaming you, I realize how hard of a chapter this is to write, but as a fan I would greatly hope for you to seriously consider rewriting this chapter. Either way I will keep reading though and keep the great work up. Because even though I just wrote a long critique I really like this story.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/7
Cool
FairyKing chapter 12 . 7/6
Welp things are nice but I thought Natsu would be more shocked at having a daughter along with realizing the sheer responsibility of been a father tho this is FT were kids grow up on their own.. I like that you keep the strong dislike that Lucy and Sorano have for each other it would be disappointing if they become friends...
Now to await for Natsu to start to train and pass more time with his daughter and Sorano after 7 long years, gotta respect Sorano not many ladies would wait that long without having any news from their boyfriend/lover...
AadenHelan chapter 11 . 7/4
one hell of a woman there still love someone after 7 years of never hearing anything from her lover
Guest chapter 11 . 6/22
Awesome to see that you’re back with an update
Fairyreturn chapter 11 . 6/19
Dang bro is good that you're back and safe from all this coronavirus crisis
Unknown chapter 10 . 6/3
Update it please
vaporizer chapter 1 . 8/3/2019
great story hope you still continuing
Guest chapter 10 . 10/9/2018
more
Dreadknight12 chapter 10 . 8/10/2018
I love the story so far I'm also curious what Natsu's reaction will be when he finds out that he's a dad, and I'm also curious how the others will react but, I'm more curious who will win in the battle between between Draco and the CSK.
SilentSniper05 chapter 10 . 6/8/2018
amazing story. lets see more.
Zapster45 chapter 10 . 12/30/2017
update it soon
Guest chapter 10 . 11/21/2017
GOD DAMMIT! Y CLIFF HANGERR
Guest chapter 10 . 7/27/2017
Wonderful story and I hope you update soon.
Jose.Frost chapter 10 . 6/16/2017
please do write more and i agree with Etherious X about giving draco his own love interest
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