Reviews for A Hawk's Plight
Hetes chapter 18 . 8/16
Pls continue Thais was so good
artem-abramov-2004 chapter 1 . 8/13
come back Sasuke :(
IntellectualSpider chapter 18 . 8/10
not really a helpful review in my opinion, but this story is really good and i cant wait for more chapters :D
Sai55 chapter 7 . 8/1
PTSD doesnt work that way. I dont understand this obsession of Fanfiction writers that know next to nothing about how to write a character with PTSD and just throw the word out there.
Phantom System chapter 16 . 7/18
wheeeeeeeeenn is the update!?
Chauncey Cardinal chapter 2 . 7/17
I like it I are ready finish chapter 2 i like it so for I hope Sasuke is going to still and be a huntsman for Ozpin I hope Sasuke is going to make the right decision I hope keep up the good work and can't wait to read more chapter's about Sasuke
AndyBurgundy chapter 18 . 7/10
Updaaaaaate
MrKeyFox chapter 3 . 7/3
I'll just have to skip all the fucking stupid Neo bits not like i'll miss anything important.
MrKeyFox chapter 1 . 7/3
This sasuke seems like a retard with his actions and stupid reactions to his answered questions but I'll hold off on my critical judgement for now.
Kian Xki chapter 18 . 6/9
lol

At least this time the [immortal goddess] is merely a mundane witch cursed with immortality

Drop her in a volcano, launch her in space, leave her in a different dimension

Suigetsu will be upset for the lack of firepower in his new side "come on! I switched sides and this is all i get? Each member of your team of super criminals could be defeated by a team of genin, you cannot reshape the landscape with your attacks and even your Biju are nothing more than overgrown summons! Even Karin would be more useful!"
Kian Xki chapter 9 . 6/9
Is he giving up the secrecy of jujitsu?

While amazing it also appears quite lazy

A genius would have defined and limited what abilities he would use with each identity, this wouldn't be limited to eye power, element affinity and weapon of choice

Then again, Sasuke might have talent but he never saw the point of subtlety

Meh, I'm probably annoyed by the dramatic reveal being a puff of smoke that gave up an advantage rather than dramatic chuckle while taking off the helmet
Kian Xki chapter 6 . 6/8
I have to wonder if 'Gaara' will be using Sand Manipulation in the next chapter, it is kind of a blood limit but Sasuke has his super sharingan powers

giving your ability to edit i would recommend changing Sasuke's use of Gaara's disguise as full time while doing criminal activities (meeting with said criminals does count)

While he has some measure of 'trust' with Neo and Roman (only criminal contact) the same couldn't be said about the White Fang minions

He is smarter than Naruto and already limiting himself so people (Ozpin) won't find out his long list of abilities

I don't think he would risk his hard work to some idiot calling the wrong name when it could blow his cover

It also makes him sound like an idiot when he does not make a proper use of alternate identities... the idiot friend/side kick who keeps calling the hero by their secret identity while in costume or their hero name in their daily life
Machcia chapter 16 . 5/19
After reading through this thrice in past 3 years, I'm about ready for another chapter, cheers.
LOL chapter 1 . 5/16
Teru Mikami approves! Keep it up!
Guest chapter 18 . 5/14
This is the best Sasuke/RWBY crossover story I ever read. I hope you update soon!
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