Damn it, Clove stop being amazing! It's not fair, you're so good! You using that personal style (that telling but you show it,) such as,

"Go home, he tells her, and the words echo (go home go home go home) as her breath seizes, sputters in her throat. Enobaria is crowned in gold and glory, as radiant as the sun, and she thinks to herself how much better this is than killing, than winning: hope makes her come alive."

And I love that! It's so hard to master, and I love the Brutus. I like how he was a friend and not a lover, I've been seeing a lot of that now days.

Also, I just love it. Showing Enobraia's story from the beginning is so intense. We see the whole thing, and lastly did I mention that I hate Coin?
And the non-Victor rebels? (And I love how you incorporated the idea that the rebels hate anyone who isn't a outspoken rebel.)

So overall, I'm can't even. ITS SO GOOD!

Wow very well written! Enobaria was very in character, her attitude towards the other characters was very believable. Your writing is very good, just the right about of description that made me want to keep reading the next sentence and illustrating the scene.

Wow Bellicose! This is so great! God, I love it. The title is perfect, Enobaria is perfect, all of her relationships are perfect, everything is just perfect. Everything in just the right amount, absolute perfection. I love you, ur so awesome!

THANK YOU SO MUCH, WOW! Oh my goodness, that is an amazing fic! The detail is beautifully crafted and it's all so believable. I love it!