Once more, the author of this fanfiction has a new account, and that is Yellowberri! I just want to make sure that everyone who wants to keep reading this story goes to their new page.

Your rewrite IS better than this. For anyone looking for it, the author forgot their accounts password and made a new account. It is Yellowberri. Have fun!

Please update when you can.i love this book

Great story, very enjoyable.

The start note made me so fricking happy you dont understand

Aw, I just found this story and it is ADORABLE. I love the kids and I am just a sucker for ASL Whitebeard pirates stories. Thank you for posting it!

So... gonna update soon? The stories awesome and all of them are in character. Love how Ace developed as well.

I agree. Cherry pies are disgusting!
Brilliant fic, can’t wait for another chapter!

Awesome fic! Please update!

Damn, I'm really enjoying this, I do hope you'll update soon man.

so good

Lucy's first intro to ze crap. I hope he's ready to fight whatever the storm brings him and can help protect his friends!

Loved it, loved it even more cause it was finished. Also baby Sanji is my drug. Also bratty Ace. Okay thanks for the fic, have a nice day.

This is a nice story.. please update soon~

So I love this story and it's amazing. I'm just trying to figure out if it's done or not. It kinda sounds like a final chapter...but you haven't marked it as complete. If you ARE continuing, I think it'd be good to see more ASL/Whitebeard bonding. Especially Marco and Luffy and Marco and Ace. But good job!