Reviews for Journey to the West
Guest chapter 9 . 5/1/2016
Sunset is a lost princess . No more starlight glimmer.
knightofluna1 chapter 2 . 1/28/2016
Little too obvious who Sunset is is going to be
Elizabeth chapter 12 . 1/8/2016
Well, that was an end!

This was a wonderful story, and I'll be looking forward to the one-shots :3

Good luck ;)
emily.g.chandler chapter 12 . 1/7/2016
Wonderful, heart warming, beautiful story. I'm happy for Sunset and Vesta.
gordhanx chapter 12 . 1/7/2016
And we have come, to the final chapter. This should be good :D . Aw crap! It's the personification of the shadow ponies! This is really bad! And…what the HECK?! Why are why all suddenly in pain?! OH SHIT THEY'RE CONNECTED?! YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME! There's gotta be someway to stop this thing! And the only way, so is for one the ailerons to be sacrificed.…oh man, this is going to be sad! And Silver sacrifices himself. After all that he's done, he'll finally redeem himself. But wait…GOLD?! OH MY GOD GOLD! While I did kind of know, in the back of my mind that he'd be one, who'd be connected it still was incredibly heartbreaking, to see him go. His final moments, were incredibly bittersweet and hit me right in the feels. That aside, it was nice seeing all of their reactions, to Sunset's ascension. And after so long, the mother and daughter finally talk after so much time apart. And it was perfect. With little to no words between them, you perfect captured the heartwarming reunion and emotions, of these two being together after so long. Very touching. And of course, she's coronated. And it's great. A lovely ending to a fun story. Great work my dear. Loved it :) .
GuardianAngel1234567 chapter 12 . 1/7/2016
No! There was another way! It was so obvious! How can you not see it? I'm happy Sunset is reunited with her Mother, but really!
iAmRandom chapter 11 . 12/21/2015
Another great chapter! Can't say I'm not sad the story is coming to an end, but if it's near completion I can't argure ;)

Good thing Streak was with them and OHMYGOD ALICORN SUNSET YAAS
But wait! What is that cliffhanger with the shadows?
The next chapter shall give us the answer.

So I guess all that's left is the final chapter and maaaybe an epilogue? :O
Guest chapter 11 . 12/16/2015
Good chapTer, plas update ASAP!
Elizabeth chapter 11 . 12/16/2015
Alicorn Sunset! :3

The scene of Gold surprised me... so many questions answered finally :'D
And the moment of the spell... when Prometheus shouted Sunset's (or Apolla's) name...

I just love your story, but hate the cliffhangers :'v

What now?! More Shadow ponies? King Sombra?
Guess I'll have to wait 'till next chapter...

Luck!
ShadowSpirit020 chapter 11 . 12/16/2015
Yay! Sunset found her family, but oh no! The Shadows are coming
gordhanx chapter 11 . 12/16/2015
All right, new chapter! Hurray! Gold is free! That's great to know :) . And everyone one's reunited and all is forgiven :) . How sweet :D . And hey he found the cure. That's great :D . But OH SHIT! HE'S BEEN EFFECTED! THAT'S NOT GOOD! AND SHIT THE SHADOW PONIES ARE HERE! Aww man, Gold can't keep it up, for much longer! Guess it's time for Sunset, to take his place. And they DID it! Everyone's free from the shadows! That's great to see :D . But wait…something's happening to Sunset. Could it be? OH MY GOD IT IS! SHE'S GAINED HER WINGS! She's an officially and Alicorn! And damn it's great to see :D . And the mother and daughter, are reunited at last. And it is simply heartwarming :) . But OH SHIT WHAT'S HAPPENING! THE SHADOW PONIES, STILL AREN'T GONE?! YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME! Oh man what's going to happen next?!
GuardianAngel1234567 chapter 11 . 12/15/2015
You said it Author. ;)
iAmRandom chapter 10 . 12/10/2015
Oh my god the hype is real! Gold is a statue? :O
Guest chapter 10 . 12/5/2015
awe-man, another cliffhanger! I hate tose. Any way, good chapter,but here's my big question:
Why did Promtheus let Sunset go to the shadowlands?
If sunset was my daughter, I wouldn't let a mile near there! ;)
gordhanx chapter 10 . 12/4/2015
All right, let's read this thing :D . And the princesses finally find out, what happened to their father. Hopefully this means, they'll be able to save him. That and it was actually, very fascinating to see their reactions, to Gold trying to cure Shadow Ponies. Really felt bad for Vesta, when she realises the full consciences of what she has done. REALLY heartbreaking. So it was very sweet, to see Sunset comforting her. Very touching Daughter/Mother moment :) . And thus, the great adventure begins. This should be good :D . And awww, poor Vesta :( :( . Really look forward, to seeing the touching mother daughter revelation finally happen. But…OH MY THEY FOUND GOLD!…AND HE'S A STATUE!
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