I can totally see Erza all but driving poor Lucy up a wall and being that insane with her. The fact Erza's an energizer bunny without an off switch would be a rough thing to contend with day in and day out that way. Though I have a feeling that Lucy's crush on Freed is not going to make the temporary crashing at Laxus' place easy on her by any stretch of the imagination either.

Haha oh he will be a great big brother

Please update soon!

Don't ship FrAxus, but... I'll deal. This story is too awesome to sweat over small details like that.

I know BOTH those songs! Your choice for the first was amazing by the way.

This is really captivating so far, it's nice to se a fan fiction with Natsu and Lucy that doesn't have them throwing themselves at each other. Not saying those are bad but this one is heart warming when her friends comfort her

...ok...dafuq? Please please please tell me you'll be updating this very soon, cause I might go nuts otherwise

Ok, please correct me if I'm wrong, but something is developing between freed and Lucy isn't there?

I AM SO CONFUSED ABOUT THE PAIRINGS! (Well, good work, wanna read the rest! Thx)

Wow Lucy is such a bitch

Looks like Lucy is falling for Freed a tad bit on the crush side of things at the very least. Going to be making things much more awkward than they already are with Laxus I have a feeling. I like the fact that Laxus is trying to sort his head out and realize Lucy is not her mother, even if they look a lot alike. I also think it is awesome that Lucy is trying so hard to get to know the Thunder Tribe for their own unique selves, and understand them as best they will let her into how their minds work. Glad that Evergreen did not take things wrong when Lucy asked what she had done to offend. The fact she opened up a bit at that point, and the way they worked through things by talking it out was a very nice touch. I really liked the details of how the stiffness was broken once Evergreen actually explained a few things. IT allows Lucy to have better insight so she can find that middle ground needed for her and Evergreen to become better friends as time progresses.

Now let's hope that Laxus can manage to get through his I'm an ass and I don't really mean it phase so he can begin to get to know Lucy for herself and she can get to know hom for who he is under all that aggravating snarkiness.

Perfect. Now they just need the awkward heart to heart moment. I wonder when Lucy will find out that Freed is all for Laxus...

I can't wait until the next chapter.

The story seems great so far!

But I'd think that Lucy's fear of Laxus isn't irrational at all...

I think I know what's going to happen and oh my lordy have I been ready for this

Freed and Lucy friendship is everything. Love the way you write them. I never knew I needed this. Spot on with a great chapter.