Reviews for Neglect |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story I really it good job writing the story please continue it soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this. It’s going great. I don’t care what everyone else thinks, your a genius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really into this story so far and loving a smart/powerful Naruto. Sasuke bashing included and a cute Kimimaru!~ Looking forward to the next upload! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter. i like kimi and naru relationship. would like having kimimaro kissing naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kimimaro really respect naruto and naruto really care for him.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short and straightforward. While guessing Naruto is either hiding the fact he has the Rinnegan by saying he only has two elements, or is working towards all six. Right now, curious on when the character development starts, like say, if it happens during the Chunin Exams, like throw in a little backstory on when the family finally decided to allow Naruto to become apart of the family, or have Naruto start asking them when did they care about him? Even reveal if they knew what they were doing the whole time, but never fully thought out what the consequences would be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! Make the exams there! Also...UPDATE! Please! |
![]() ![]() I'm 10 and I want to be like kushina and I now know that akane mishina and naruto are twins and if you want to write a story can you tell me what date in september was minato born |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good keep the chapters coming |
![]() ![]() update please ! |
![]() ![]() Im not all that into naruto being a kage but i think it would be a interesting idea. Please update soon author |
![]() ![]() Please don't simply let this story die, keep going |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go |
![]() ![]() ![]() I fucking love the way you have Kimimaro act towards naruto. He reminds me of a small kitten and I love it. Great character development and attitude |