No problem. Sorry I took so long I've been a bit busy. good luck and I hope you update soon.

I like the storyline but your writing style is a bit annoying at times. I write my own literature so I am very picky with certain things. Try not to make the story too chatty. If you aren't sure how to make it less annoying ask a beta to do it for you. I am thinking of becoming a beta myself and would be willing to do it for you. Great story though. Merry Christmas!
~ CristaMitchels

Sorry I'm late I didn't realize you updated. Thanks. You are one of my favorite authors, too. This was a great chapter I can't wait for more. And your welcome, I like the authors that reply to their reviewers it's nice to chat with people that are more like yourself.

Needs to be longer. Add in Edward! Also, luke how you explained why Bella was so helpless during Twilight.

Yeah I totally agree! I love to write drama, though I'm not sure the characters appreciate me jacking up their past to make them fit. I was so glad they got Magnus right because I love him in the books. I don't think Jace really fit though he's way to obedient and serious. Sorry about your coach. Hope you feel better. I'm glad you like to put in twists because I like to read them. I have to go to class now, so bye. Good luck!

Yeah, I guess your right about drama. In my story there's a lot of it between Izzy and the Percy Jackson character Thalia Grace. I finally got to watch the show to and I have to agree. The show is good and all but the cast doesn't really fit. Can't wait to find out what you were going to say last. Also I see Angela is a warlock. I honestly did not see that coming, and that really doesn't happen to me, but it was still really good.

I have not seen the show yet and I enjoy drama (I say this hoping that doesn't make me sound like a bad person. Its kind of a way to take my mind off of my life when I read about the drama of others). Also this chapter was great I'm glad to have an idea as to when I can expect an update and I get the business. I just recently posted a story (my first public one) and was updating every few days for the first 2 weeks, then school got busy again and I can't really find time to write. It's only been a week sense my last update but I'm usually on top of this so it's really weird not to update so much for me. Also I think Angela is a Shadowhunter.

I love the last part it it was hilarious you did a great job on this chapter.

This story sounds totally cool. I think you should continue it and I hope you update it soon. :)

Pls update

Please update! ! ! ! ! !