THIS WAS FANTASTIC I'M YELLI N G

title makes no difference, I just hope you write more!
this is soo good! it made me feel happier

Ayyye these stories makes no sense whatsoever but theyre so funny lol

WOOHOO YOU ACTUALLY LIKED MY IDEA!

what about the cherubs that appear around Marie? I always thought those were weird...

I'm going to consider this a series and tbh this is my favorite series no one can tell me otherwise

Oh dear Mew, that joke about Marie being kidnapper bait never gets old! XD

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this so far, and I nearly fell out of my seat laughing. I wish these events were actually in the game.

I'm glad to see a second chapter for this!
I burst out laughing when Raphael greeted Charlie with coucou, and laughed for most of the fic. Charlie's disguise skills certainly had me intrigued!

This was such a fun fic, not only for the moments between these characters, but for how you picked up on the oddity of the mini-game. I certainly had't put much thought into Charlie's combusting football before now XD