Sweet jeebus

Can you maybe make a part 2 where she does have kid?

Christ this was beyond hot

What did he do?! What does big kid do?!

That was hot

Damn.
And here I was thinking, halfway through:

"And this, kids, is how Nashi was made."

XDDD

This was awesome sauce.
You write really good smut.

And I LOVE the ending.
So in-character~

Loved it! Wonder if you have more!

Funny twist! Was it April fools? :P

Ok, wow. That was AMAZING! I love your writing and I can honestly say this is the best NaLu Smut fic that I have read so far (and I've read a LOT). Please write more NaLu? It's hard to find really well written smut fics and it was so refreshing to find one! I'm definitely "author following" you and will be on the look out for future fics!

aw that was a cute ending! (:

oh my mavis... fans self and ducks under the covers... that was hot. good job!

Damn, this was SO hot! Your smut is amazingly well written. Perfect pacing, and I love that you didn't shy away from 'dirty' words. A job. Can't wait to read more from you.

Great job!

wow hot

Lol this was so hawt. Hope you have more stories about these two soon :D