please continue this its awesome

Man this is a great story so far. Its not often you see predator stories...much less so that are good... Great job love your work

Wow, that was awkward for the teams. And Nora and Penny's child-like behavior was absolutely adorable! Keep this up, because I wanna see where it goes!

This is rather funny but good nice work.

When is the next update

nice chapter dude hilarous seeing yang getting distracted so many times, looks like yang gonna get a lot of nosebleed and a river of drool letting all the fantasies riding over her head like a chu chu! heating up to the point of no return o should i say brain overload.
Please give us the next chapter dude, and one more thing let Jaune be their trainer to be better hunters.

ok this is some seriously funny shit and is awesome, but i am fearful for those in the tournament because pretty sure predators just might kill all of his opponents. also it seems a bit too rushed especially at the end and just my personal opinion (not sure if you will want to do this) maybe have them directly ask questions to Ja'aan about certain things. there are other things but i just can't quite put my finger on it, but i really enjoyed this one and will follow it up by reading the other one that seems to have the same premise. for now though good job and good luck with your writings.

Can Ja'aan see in color? Because yautja can't when they don't have their mask, everything is heavily red tinted because of their natural heat vision and bad eye sight. It's weird why have heat vision when you can't see well? Anyway their mask can let them see many spectrums of color as well as our own and possibly ones we can't even comprehend.

PRPN Teamn Propane.

I can't help but feel Very Amused of Ja'aan Character. His sense in being a Parental Guardian towards Penny and Nora was Actually (To Me) very cute. And his Aggressive yet Protective nature towards that is also amusing (In a Good Way). That and of course there's his lack of knowledge of Human Concept/Society - er...something as well.

I really hope to see more of this Story along with some of your other stories dear Writer.

Peace!

predators don't have a category by itself it is under the ,movie section and is lumped with the alien vs predator movie, just so you know

I WANT MOOORE!

Good chapter.

Harem thats all the pairing also love the story

You must continue this please! I was doubtful at first but HOLY shit I love it. Please write more. Thanks :)